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It is criminal. I get upset with the real part of these stories and the real part of these stories is the betrayal. That is NOT fantasy. Kids are betrayed by their parents every day but in these stories the betrayal is particularly heinous. The process induced in this story is maximally truncated. One visit from a doctor and everyone is convinced to act in his best interest against his consent?

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Disgusting, horrible, sickly, ridiculous,etc...

amazing

its a very good story intresting all along well written and understood

hi
this is the best story i have ever read , and i do read it frequently.
As far as the technical loopholes are considered ,we all know that it is impossible,its fantacy , a well driven fantacy without being dragged on unnecessary issues . its not a press reporting of an incident... its a SHORT and SWEET fantacy which not only I but many likeminded people dream of...

      OK, so I don't like to knock first efforts, but... the story line makes no sense and the spelling is terrible . Just one point (among many) - why didn't the teachers, administrators and students at the high school notice anything was even slightly amiss when ,overnight ,Alex disappeared and Alyssa appeared- in the middle of the school year? Excuse me, has Alyssa ever heard of transcripts and transfer procedures? This story has way too many holes.

I agree with Nora, this story does not hold together. It could have been developed into something good but there are whole things just missed out. You hinted at his angst when wearing knickers for the first time but left it there. After the WTF at the doctors why did he just roll over and give in. You built him up to be a rebel then he lost his cause.
Also as is common with writing on this (& other sites) CLOTHS is not how you spell CLOTHES.

Nice story in the bad-boy-to-good-girl genre. But (picky, picky,
I know) please, PLEASE note the difference between "defiantly" &
"definitely"!
.
--Pervy

Sorry,
But I just don't think this story line flys.  What kind of "normal" parents would listen to their son's x girlfriend, and drag their son to a shrink. Then not even getting a second opinion when said shrink says their son must live as a girl.  Especially if there have never been any incidents in the past of the son crossdressing at all.  

Then when the son refuses to play along they force the issue. I also didnt think the g/f smacking and playing domme all of a sudden was that good.  I stopped reading the story when it became clear to me that the girl just seemed intent on making the boy suffer and be humiliated for some reason.