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How I became a Queen
by Deborah Leigh Johnson

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Comment by jjconn on 06/28/17
do you realize how many laws she broke by doing that to him for HER OWN PERVERSE desires not his?? she should have just dumped him cause it's gonna take years to readjust his mind & she'll never get any licenses to practice if she gets caught & all he has to do is get a complaint so he gets fired & it all comes out into the open!!! carol goes to jail & he gets years of therapy & will most likely still be turned into a lonely women or a prostitute, does that sound like a good life?? or walk out infront of a bus or big truck??

Comment by Yuto on 07/09/12
Ben and Troy taught me how to run the sound board and all that jazz, and that is when I best got to know him. I knew him prliuovsey from youth group and church and that. The last time I got to see him was when him, Troy, and I went to Troy's house and made pizza and stuff. We put some mentos into some diet coke for one of Troys projects and watched some MacGyver. Eventually we ended up watching funny videos and stuff.. I remember playing pickleball at the camp with Ben, Isaac, Seth, and Reed. I think my favorite memory was going to the Bentley's new house the day of Ben and Amanda's graduation. I was helping Ben with the video and powerpoint for the graduation, and then I found some hilarious picture of Amanda, and then me and Ben played keep away while Amanda chased us around  trying to get the picture. The graduation that night was a lot of fun too. Everybody and their brother came to cheer Ben on when his name was called.

Comment by lori on 01/31/12
lovely gentle story

Comment by leelee on 01/30/09
Well this is certainly my kind of fantasy story.  How many times have I wished that somebody  ( a woman actually) would take the time to put me in a hypnotic state and lead me into the world of my fantasies coming real. I have been so close to actually doing things and then backed away leaving myself only a bried period of masturbating through the fantasy.  To be hypnotized and femininized and turned into a mental submissive sissy in dresses is such a wonderful dream and you have enforced it for me   Thank You  

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/30/06
I just re-read this story and I stand by my comments of a year ago.  Carol didn't want a girlfriend, just the opposite she wanted to make sure her boyfriend remained her BOY friend, a sissy male boy toy slut who she knew would be ashamed and humiliated for her amusement because she commanded him to be.  What a bitch and what a perversion of femininity !

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/30/05
I thought this was going to be a really good love story about a girlfriend helping her lover to be happy embracing his feminine side.  Instead she turns him into a slut, commanding him to be ashamed and feel humiliated mentally at the same time "she" feels good physically.   What a power tripping bitch Carol turned out to be!  No one who loved a person would encourage him or her to feel ashamed and humiliated.

Comment by michelle on 08/03/04
A nice story, though it would never really happen to me.  At least I'll be able to dream and fantasize about it.  We can't all be the girls we want to be, yet not for lack of trying.

Michelle

Comment by Diane Sutton on 05/24/02
Nicely done and such a plot. I did enjoy this story and seem to find it has a wonderful flow to it as well.

Thanks Deborah for a something I truely enjoyed.

Diane

Comment by Samantha Don on 02/28/01
I have read this story and could not put it down.  I loved the way the girlgriend knew her boyfriend really wanted to be a girl and to afraid to admit it.  must admit i imagined myself in his place.

I have read a number your  stories and any time i see your name I am never disappointed and the story will be excellent

keep up your writing   I wish I could have your imaginamtion to do similair

love  to all us girls

sammy






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