soABEo Major thankies for the post.Really looking forward to read more. Much obliged.

OoWZUq Comrade kill yourself.

  I pretty much agree with Sam. A story this size needs to have more than five paragraphs. Also, is there anything wrong with using some punctuation- especially so we know that someone is speaking? I thought that Jason's comments to his mother after the switch didn't ring true at all. Finally, I thought Jason's mother's name was Beth- so why does Alex  always refer to her- when he calls her by name- as Jenna? There are some good ideas in here- but this shows a few too many "first-effort" glitches.  A good editor would go a long way in future contributions.

Here are few changes I recommend.

1. I think this story needs a few more paragraphs. The scene   changes, and new ideas are all bunched together.

2. When the wizard says tell your mother to say hi. I thought that the wizard was trying to get back at his mom. I also thought that the mom told the wizard about the problem and it was her idea. Instead he didn't mention the wizard or the ring at all to his mom or the rest of the group at the movies. I know I would have been laughing so hard I would have had to tell someone.

3. What happened to the ring? He woke up and there was no mention of it on his hand or his old body's hand. I thought it just vanished but then he mentioned it to his mom. So where was it?

4. More time should have been spent on when he first found himself in his mom's room. In one sentence he put on a skirt, blouse, pantyhose and heels and did his makeup. For instance we know he could only fit into some of their heels so if I was the character in the story I would try on one I could never fit into. I would also enjoy putting on each item. What is the feel and look of the blouse on my body knowing it's for my body and having real breasts sticking out instead of what I use to stuff in my bra. I also would love sliding the nylons on my smooth hairless legs at seventeen I'm sure he has hair on his legs. Plus sliding on the skirt and ziping it up by the mirror he has to admire the way he's dressed remembering his mom in these exact clothes. Then the makeup putting on her lipstick the smell of her perfume, the long painted nails all aspects we did not get to feel. Finally the hardest thing for me to believe is she wore no jewelry. She was engaged but had no ring, she didn't wear necklaces, braclets, watches, earrings. These are all essential items to a woman. Slipping on the diamond engagement ring his mom was so proud of showing off on to his hand. Putting on earring that brushed his neck when he walked. Slipping on a necklace that hangs almost to his breasts. I believe we needed to feel all these things I stated what he felt like as he dressed as his mom for the first time.