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How I Met My Husband
by Michelle C

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Comment by KAREN MARIE on 09/16/12
i would love to find someone like that and make me feel like the true woman i am

Comment by Dillis on 09/03/10
What a beautiful story between two homosexual school boys (I don't like to use the word 'gay' since it makes them into 'queers' and I am sure they are of quite a natural disposition and not 'odd'). So sensitively written and love struck it makes one envious. It said in the write-up 'castration and hormones' which was not the case luckily, which could only reduce ones pleasure.

Comment by Geena on 11/03/09
WOW!

OK.... It's now 2009, and no new chapters!  Let's go girl!


Comment by anna on 12/30/08
OOOOOOOOOOhhhhh! I'm shivering with lust after reading your story.  Oh! how I need a beautiful husband like that to love me for my beautiful feminine body and make me scream in ecstacy with his beautiful hard masculine cock.

Thank you Michelle for such a lovely story. More please,more.


Comment by leelee on 09/03/08
written just like a girl!  Oh wait , you are a girl. Now I understand and what a woman you will make.  Oh if all our fantasies  could be a good as your story  THANK YOU    

Comment by Matthew on 12/02/05
Enjoyed reading your story and would Love to continue as soon as it would be possible.

Comment by Melissa Carmichael on 11/14/04
Absolutely lovely, I cried at the end. So sweet.

Comment by RJMcD on 12/15/01

----- I actually read this by mistake because I don't read stories until they're finished. If they're good I find it frustrating that I can't have the rest - right now!

And this was good. Very good. (I also don't usually read stories with lead characters under 18 but only noticed the 'husband' in the title, so I assumed). The joy, the femininity, and the unabashed romantic mood were refreshing and very well written. I hope Parts 2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9, etc are done by Monday so I can read the rest of the story - right now!

RJMcD

Comment by Fair Frank on 09/05/01
Beautifully written and romantically intense. What a great fantasy! I was able to put myself into the story fully, and it was sweet. Sigh.

Comment by Cissy Gaye on 09/03/01
Very sweet and very sexy. Nice build-up, some nice humorous touches, the girlish longing was nicely done and the dialog flowed beautifully.  The finale was very hot without ruining the sweet mood. Just lovely.  Thank you for a wonderful tale.



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