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How It All Began - Five Years Old
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Comment by thisisme on 08/02/13
The younger the victim is the more pissed off I become. Five years old is basically utterly helpless and dependant. Bullies are not only located on schools and campuses. Comment by juliej on 07/17/10 intersting story Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 06/26/10 Very, very bad story. Comment by Molly on 05/07/08 I would also remark that my parents used other methods (than forced fem) to crush my spirit. Authoritarian people cannot tolerate being challenged in any way. Comment by Molly on 05/07/08 I sense from the brief synopsis and Angel's comment here that this story is autobiographical. It certainly puts the dark aspects of "A Life Ever Changing" into context. Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 09/06/07 ANGEL, WHAT THOSE PARENTS AND MOM DID WAS CRUEL. I DO NOT BLAME RICKY FOR BEING MAD, HOW DARE HIS MOM PUNISH HIM FOR STANDING UP FOR HIMSELF Comment by Angel O'Hare on 09/10/04 Jenna, Comment by Jenna on 09/09/04 Gross. In my book there is NOTHER a five year old could do that needs to be responed to by being crewel. this is just abuse by sick sick people. Not you beat work dear,not by a long shot. Sorry but I difinitly disliked this one. Comment by julie on 02/02/04 an interesting story it seems that rickeys mother wanted a girl not a boy they way hospital staff went about was not very proffesional and what a way to go to wake up in a girls ward with everything in plain site this story has far more to add to it and hopefully we will get to here more of this story it will be very interesting Comment by Ray Kitten on 02/17/03 ICK! I am not really a fan of stories based around cruelty for it's own sake and that is clearly what this story is. I would suggest a more reasonable motivation for the actions of the mother and nursing staff, like for whatever reason he has to be kept in the girls ward and so they disguise him to in fact save him humiliation, admitedly the plot is strained in that example but I feel the same of the story as it stands. |
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