Ditto the comments by Pervette.  No need to re-hash her points since they are well-supported.  I will, however, add that I don't believe this story is true as written.  The events may have happened, but not in the manner portrayed here.  Ditto also on the spell-checker comment.  Every instance of the word "well" should be "will" and vice versa - though this may be more of a find/replace gone wild.

Anyhoo...despite the problems, the story is worth reading if you are looking strictly for erotica.  The B&D and sex was well thought-out.  The villan was truly evil and persistent - the kind of guy all of us sissy subs would like to meet.  I personally would like to have seen the B&D continue, but that is personal preference speaking.

I can relate to the main character's feelings homophobia.  It may be a social indoctrination, but I too cannot look upon any man with anything approaching lust.  Just the thought of a man immediately kills the mood for me.  But there is always that lingering doubt in me because of my attraction to other TGs.

Well, keep up the good work (but do check into the volunteer editors available here).  I look forward to your next story.

Hugs,
-Ami

First, I think we have another case of a spell checker run wild
here:
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"Dana, in order to learn how to use that delouses body of yours..."
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Dana may be well on the way to being a slut at this point, but
there's no indication that he's lousy! What kind of typo for (I
assume) "delicious" can cause a spell checker to guess "delouses"
would be interesting to find out.
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The story itself has a number of problems. First, that's the wrong
way to seduce someone. The right way is to make him want it so
badly he will try to seduce *you.* (That used to work for me,
anyway. Of course, it's not much use to someone who wants a fantasy
about coercion and blackmail.) And Dana came round at the end
entirely too quickly to be believable. (What happened to that wife
of his, BTW? Given her attitude as sketched at the beginning of the
story, the first thing I would have done in his shoes was spill the
whole story to her. The wife who took her hubby en femme to a gay
club for his birthday would *not* divorce him as a pervert.)
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It's labelled as a "true story." Well, maybe it is. Life does offer
the most unlikely eventualities; but if I may say so, if it had
happened to me, I would never want to admit to having handled the
situation so clumsily. (And it would have been I who seduced Mike!)
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Pervy