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How I Was Helplessly Changed From My Mothers Son to Her Sissy Daughter
by Susan Petty 2000

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Comment by corey on 02/20/10
absolutely love your "How I was Helplessly Changed from my Mother's Son to her Sissy Daughter" story hope you continue it :) much appreciated for the time and effort you put into writing it.

Comment by Missy-Susan Pauline Bauer on 05/18/09
Dear Miss Susan,

I enjoyed your story. I'm up late, past my bedtime, but I did want to visit, "Crystal's Storysite," first.

I selected your shortest story due to time. The events happened very quickly, it seemed. You did make Carla's life with her Mummy seem to be a natural event. You wrote well in the descriptions of most of the clothes. I know, that if I had a Mom who wanted a daughter instead of a son, you wouldn't have to ask me twice about what to wear or where I'd be working.

I just, "had," to read a story by a, "Susan." As I'm sure you do, I just love my femme name. My Mistress/Wife gave me the, "Missy." It's not a nickname for Melissa. It's my title of address. Since I'm not a genetic woman and She had a problem with me using, "Ms."  One afternoon, I was in my French Maid's Uniform. I was serving my Mistress and Her friend cocktails and tea sandwiches; Her friend couldn't be bothered to remember my name and wanted more ice. She just called out, "Missy!" My Mistress/Wife had trained me to respond to the little dinner bell. I entered, curtsied, and asked, "Miss?"
Then my Mistress told me, "That's it! You are going to be called, "Missy." It'll also help you know your place in MY home."

That's how I got to be Missy-Susan. If I hear both names, then I know that I've done something wrong and will be, "corrected."

From one Susan to another, well written, Ms. Susan Petty 2000.

Sisterly yours,

Missy-Susan Pauline Bauer


Comment by Janine on 05/31/07
Please say there is going to be a continuation to this story.  Thank you very much.

Comment by juliej on 01/14/07
a great start to this story and are looking forwards to the next part please make it soon well done brilliant story

Comment by vanessa on 08/14/06
I'm eagerly looking forward to the next installment.



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