Enjoyable story.
Fi

I wish you had time to finish this story here, or on another site.  If you have, I would appreciate knowing where.

Blessings, Great story! I hope all is well. I would love A second part.
Love and Light Rhiannon

I thought this story, with few grammatical errors was a good story. The problem is it didn't go far enough.  What happened to the Honeybees soccer team, did they go on to play for a title?   Also one other fact comes to mind.  The sister was suppose to be in the wedding as a junior bridesmaid yet there is no further mention of it, Why?  Did he fill in for her as well?  These are some of the questions that need to be answered.
 There needs to be a part 2 and a part 3 to answer the above questions.  So please complete this story, IT NEEDS TO DONE!!

Hi Jennifer,

Thank-you for such a wonderful story, really enjoyed it.  If you did a part 2 please post! :-)

Thanks again,
Philipa xxx.

This was a decidedly good start!  Please,please, follow through.  Poor Jennifer doesn't deserve to be left hanging for all these years.

Ole

I have a new oxymoron for the 21st century: grammar school. I've heard it said that we are becoming a 3rd world nation, but I think even those nations of the so-called 3rd world speak and write in their native languages better than we do in ours. What has happened to any shred of literacy that we once possessed?

Hi Jennifer,
           I love this story, Please continue with the next part.
It would be great to see how Jennifer copes with being at school and on the team let alone with the social implications of a teenage girl.

Luv,

Rose

   Ok you got my interest and your story is good ... does the team win the championship ? what happens in the next chapter..?

please more more  please  .. thank you for your skill and talent

Rone

Please, please, please write more to this story, it is great so far and i am really looking forward to reading more of it!!
Greg

Hope a follow up/part 2 wont be long

It's a really super story, warm and loving. I can't wait to read what comes next. MORE PLEASE.
A big hug.

Love this story well writen except for the speelling and grammar problems that do pop up every now and then.  Keep up the good work and try to prrof it before posting the next part.

Hi Jennifer!  Please continue the story - I love it, especially because it's about a Jennifer :-)

Hi Jennifer  :)

Your storyline is great, please continue the story.

Hugs, Fran

Hey Jennifer:

  Nice job and lots of loose ends to tie up. This beginning is great as you have captured our attention and given us a pretty bad teaser. How Jack Became Jennifer is very well written, smooth, concise and yet well developed and allows for a big hearted hero/heroine to shine. I wonder what descision Jack will make? Please don't keep us hanging too long. Some more details of the transfomation would be appreciated though.

Hugs,

Kristi

Hi Jennifer
This is truely an excellent story so far. You have the makings of a tallented writer. I look forward to reading more of what happens to Jack/Jennifer. Keep up the excellent writtings.

John