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How Kara Learned to Dance
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Comment by Mike on 08/11/23
Love this story! Has this author written any more? Comment by Silvia. (from Brazil) on 07/09/09 I'm sorry, but the story isn't good. Comment by April on 03/07/03 Dear Ms. Smith: Comment by Paula on 03/05/03 LOVE THE STORY BUT THE WHOLE LAUREN bit had left me puzzled too Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 03/05/03 The story was intriguing, but isn't transgender fiction. Beyond that, it raises more questions than it answers. Who is Lauren? is she organic or robotic? Is magic or advanced technology at work? Why is she doing this to Kara and her husband? One imagines there is a political plot here but nothing is clear. |
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