Not sure

Ŕ real pleasure to read.  I wish there would have been a continuation...  Level 3...  4...  5...

Oh! My GOD!
Very bad story.
Silvia.

A rich, powerfully intoxicating first read. I was transported into the story seamlessly and became the recipient of your vivd imagination, mentally receiving the stimulas from your writing; I became Pamela. What you so talently described is the subject of all my private, unfulfilled fantasies!

What a fascinating story. I'm new to this site but your story has really awakened deep rooted desires for me to be dominated, feminised and humiliated.
I really like the idea of orgasm denial as part of the training and conditioning and what a wonderful way to eventually find out how one's own release can be achieved
A great read.  

I find this cruel and unusual. It was a good read though

this is an intresting new concept in panty punishement brain washing etc what a great story well written &described more please

I loved the start and the new take on the transformation.  I hope you continue with the storyline like what does she do after she is transformed and the like.  I'll be waiting for you.    Luv   Rachel Rae

First I loved the story up until it ended. I don't know why but I thought there was going to be so much more to read and know about the little universe you created. For being a first story my minor complaint should mean little in the long run as you show lots of potential.

A great first story. I loved the idea od the VR suit!