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Humiliated
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Mariah on 05/09/13
Another good story Janet, I could hear that grating noise as the bully got his nose broken, when that grating noise goes through your skull right to your ears that is a message you can't help but hear.  Trust me, I remember that day.

Comment by Aleesha on 04/08/09
As always you have told a great story. I was half expecting that Jill would have had SRS after her beating. Thanks.

Comment by AJF on 01/30/08
I love this story. I love all your stories. I really hope you write more like this in the future.

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/28/07
Janet, you had me crying through out this story. Jeff's humiliation was completed when his enemy[I can't write the name, as it is my name, and I would support Jeff-Jill]]  castrated him by kicking him in the gonads. Jill's journey wwas completed when she developed breasts of her own without aide. Janet, Jill needs to complete her story. SHE NEEDS TO FING THE JOY YOU GIVE YOUR OTHER HEROINES>

Comment by juliej on 07/17/07
a brilliant story again its based on the same as previous stories but with a different twist well done well worth reading

Comment by VanVick on 04/09/01
I like your stories a lot but the predictable endings are a little too "gay" for me.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 04/07/01
as always we can count on you for a good tale

Comment by Jamie Elizabeth Burgess on 04/07/01
Janet this is a great story !  It's about facing up to the opposition and facing them down.  I would have preferred to have the protagonist disable the villan, but realism and friends who recognize courage is a very good substitute.  I once had to face up to a government security investigator and after I said, "blackmail is illegal, go right ahead and try it" he said he saw no problem.  That was a long time ago, but I still advocate giving pain back to it's source as a way to stamp it out.  The older I get the angrier I feel at people who put others down because of their gender expression.



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