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A Humiliating Punishment
by Jennifer

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Comment by thewallis on 06/24/17
My I add my mother did this to me. Just before I run away from home I poured acid on her face. That sure as hell wiped the smirk off it.

Comment by thewallis on 06/24/17
My I add my mother did this to me. Just before I run away from home I poured acid on her face. That sure as hell wiped the smirk of it.

Comment by thewallis on 06/23/17
And women wonder why men beat the shit out of them.

Comment by juliej on 05/05/08
a 2nd chapter would be great this is a brilliant story wel worth the read

Comment by jeannette on 11/30/07
Very good story! You need to have a "Chapter 2"... like Rone Welles had suggested earlier!!!.. I wish that I could be in Jimmie's/Susan's shoes right now!!!

Comment by jeannette on 11/30/07
Very good story! You need to have a "Chapter 2"... like Rone Welles had suggested earlier!!!I wish that I could be in Jimmie's/Susan's shoes right now!!!

Comment by Rone welles on 06/13/07
   Good story and well written  a second chapter would be nice
if you can find the time ... how about a month of girl punishment
for breaking a window at the school ....  just a suggestion

thank you for sharing with us  ....****  Rone :)


Comment by marsha on 02/12/07
having read and reread all of her stories ,i still like all and every one of hers.this one is good ,but not as  good as her other ones.hopefully there will be a sequel to this story



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