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The Hunting Of Tregarth
by Felicia

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Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 01/17/03
I find this story very intiguing, with a lot of questions unanswered.  Is this a medevil magic kind of story?  At first I thought so, but then there seems to be a time travel reference at the end.  Also, who are the bad guys or gals?  It would seem to be Tregarth, but yet what we have here seems to be a group of dommes forcibly feminizing and babyfying and putting into bondage unwilling men.  Felicia seems happy with what has been and is being done to her, but not the babyfied man who was trying to escape.  Perhaps Tregarth is really the hero, agent of freedom?  Or is this forced feminization punishment for crimes?  Or are these women benevolent despots doing what they think is best for these poor souls, flawed by being born male, whether they want it or not?  I can't wait for part 3 and to find out more about this universe!  Congrats to the author for writing a story that keeps this reader's interest even though she knows she may want the author's bad guy to be the good guy. (Will they turn bad guy Tregarth into good baby girl Tregarthia?")

Comment by Bullena on 01/11/03
Hey, you could change this to Nashville and call it "The Hunting of Tregarth Brooks!"



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