Marvelous. I felt myself sinking into my chair as I read.

DISGUSTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This Story was a very intense one with out a lot stuff need to be hinted at with this low of a rating.  This is by far one of the best ones that I've read.  I would say sense you asked is that you should have gone to The House and to the date before ending it bit oh well to each is own thoughts on it.

5 stars - what a great story!

Please keep sharing your talents!!!

Thank you very much for your kind feedback.  After this, my first tentative posting, I feel very reassured and supported.

I didn't plan to write a sequel, I rather thought it was finished.  Did you feel it was unfinished?

Or even if you don't do a sequel(which would be sad), another story or 2 with Dr. Silverine

I love how the doctor uses Fiona's love for Philip against Philip
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She wanted to feel lipstick slick against lipstick when she kissed. She wanted to feel the rub of stocking on stocking when she snuggled. She wanted a woman… but she wanted her to be Philip.-----------

See, she's not really changed, she just wants to try something different....(it'd be interesting to see (and hear how Silverine does it) how Silverine changes singles, or even families)

I really enjoyed this story.  Good job.  I like the way each person around Philip was gradually changed until there was no one left to "rescue" him.  The way Philip struggled against the thoughts, feelings & images that filled his mind after viewing the DVD was very erotic.  The only thing I would have liked to see included was Dr. Silverine working her magic, i.e., an induction scene.  It would have been great to hear her convert Fiona, Jez or Martha, or Philip on the DVD.  I feel to actually be "present" for such a conversion is not only extremely erotic, but adds depth and power to a deliciously fiendish character like Dr. Silverine.  I echo the other comments in that I would love to see a continuation/sequel.  Thanx!

<< "Not Jez now, call me Jennifer. It's so much prettier, >>

Well, I did like the story till the above.  :-)

Loved the story.  Please keep on writing - you have a wonderful talent.  I do however feel that the story was somewhat lacking - you neglected to include a phone number were I could reach Dr. Silverine.

A very moving story. Please keep it going.

Excellent story

I had hoped he'd be able to fight it more, but it was a great finish.

I hope there's a sequel

the story was great, i really enjoyed the way you presented it. more please. this could be a great trilogy.