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I Dated My Brother's Teacher
by Alana

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Comment by Sharon on 01/23/12
I loved the story. thanks for the pictures you looked beautiful.

Comment by smita lanjekar on 07/03/11
Wonderful story without any pornographic trace.I loved the story.Would like to read more.

Comment by ashley on 08/18/10
nice one and I love the picures!!

Comment by Silvia on 05/25/10
BAD!

Comment by Rone Welles on 11/19/09
 Nicely written  good story ..  thank you for the suprise end
but there needs to be a next chapter ...  ( the discovery ) faze..

good work  thank you ... Rone welles


Comment by Jerri on 08/19/07
Alana,
     I loved your story, you write really well and I could follow the storyline as you read it.Keep on writing and your a lovely girl :-)
Love and hugs,
Jerri

Comment by Ruby on 07/05/07
Afer all, every girl needs a collection of special "going on a date" dresses.

Ruby


Comment by sofia lopez on 03/03/07
MUY BUENA TUS HISTORIAS ME GUSTARON MUCHO. Y ESTAS MUY HERMOSA EN ESOS VESTIDOS TAN FEMENIMOS.

GRACIAS POR COMPARTIRLAS

SOFIA
BUENOS AIRES ARGENTINA


Comment by Alexzandro on 08/02/06
This would make an excellent movie ya' know. I hope you make more of these stories with your pics . Keep it up.

Comment by Lynn         on 07/31/06
SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY. YOU ARE A VERY GOOD WRITER.

Comment by Tricia Anne on 07/30/06
Alana,

I love this story and I love your pics. What a surprise ending! Any chance there will be a sequel?

Hugs,

Tricia Anne




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