EXCELENT STORY LINE, GOOD CONTINUITY, THIS HAS THE MAKINGS OF A MIB MOVIE..THANKS-- READ IT IN ONE SITTING..MORE ?

8NjeoI Awesome article.Much thanks again. Much obliged.

Prue, you're amazing!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Great stories as good Siri as I have read

Ive read SF for over 50 yrs and in my opinion this is as good as it gets.  I'll bet even old Isaac would have liked it.  Thanks for a very enjoyable ride on your imaginary roller coaster..

This was a nice way to wrap things up, and I also liked seeing some of your friends making appearances throughout the story. It's a nice touch.

So once again, good job on the story, now when will the movie of this get made Prue?

amen

After reading part 6, all I can say is that this would make a really cool movie.

Wow.

Everytime I think Prue has reached her limits as a story teller, she goes and proves me wrong. Identikit is a fantastic and fun action packed story that leaves the reader wanting more, more, more.

The story is fast moving, and in places almost too fast, as I would have thought the trust these characters show in each other would take a bit more time to develope, but that's just a minor nitpick in an otherwise fun and entertaining story.

You know Prue, you're starting to remind me of Morpheus. You are both very prolific, and you both write really fun to read stories.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story, and I hope Crystal posts it soon.

Take care Kiwi bird, I wish you well.

Your old pal,

MM

After part 5 - This is a fanciful and enjoyable yarn. Love the little details that you keep throwing in throughout. Which are relevant to the story line, and which are in the story to enrich the way you are telling the story? Although I have my own theories, I must keep reading to find out!

Thank you for a fun escape from the everyday.

Best,

anonymousOne

Am really enjoying this!  The story itself is quite engrossing, with good elements of mystery, sci-fi, and adventure.  If anything, it's in serious danger of becoming an overly-wholesome "Charlie's Angels"-meets-StarTrek story.  Please include a bigger dose of cheap salacious tittilation!  At the end of chapter 5, I sense something sexy about to happen.  I hope I'm right!

Yet another triumphant epic from the incredibly talented mind of one of Storysite's best, Prue.  You never cease to amaze me, m'luv.  Muse, author, chatroom Mom, avenging angel when one of yours is hurt or in need, and one of the nicest people I know.  When do you find time for a real life?  LOL.  Kudos to the Kiwi Steamroller on another great story.   I'm proud of ya, Prue.  Huggles from Cathy_t_

Prue,
I think this should be the storyline for the next James Bond epic. Your story has all the makings of a great thriller but the men just seem to be too good to be true! More please.
Samantha

Yes! Prudence,
A great story, please continue.
Hugs, Fran

Wow!  I'm hooked.  A very audacious and successful first chapter, nice in every way!

I have always liked your story, and this is no exception. It's simple to understand and interesting to read. I can't wait for the next chapter.

A lot of fun, and one of the best simple, clear and non-gushing descriptions of a man learning a female body I've ever seen.

Nice and sharp dialogue, no dawdling. I'm looking forward to the rest of this one.