While I have never really enjoyed transformation stories, this series of Mistress Sue and Rachel warmed me.  I liked that Mistress Sue was a kind and gentle dominant.  I also liked that she gave Rachel the opportunity to be the dominant one, but I was appalled that Rachel took the d/s to extremes.  It has apparently been years since you wrote, but if you have more stories on another site, I would appreciate knowning where.  Of course, you may continue with this one.

This makes everything so copmleetly painless.

Disgusting an sickly.

EXCElENT STORY. WITH MANY MORE CHAPTERS TO  FOllOW I HOPE. A"10"

Although I don't like domination stories at all, this reminds me of the time when I was a teen, also in the late 60s, when I saw the most fabulous thigh-boot ensemble ever...on an episode of the ABC-TV series "It Takes a Thief". The male protagonist drafted a female convict to impersonate a wealthy young socialite named "Sydnor" in order to catch a crook.  For her role, the girl sported fashionable (for that era) short hair; long, long, long boots (extending almost to panty level) and the most incredibly tight micro-micro-miniskirt in history (at only about panty level).  No trousers needed with that outfit, I dare say.

ultra hot,a wonderful story|

Hey, great third part, glad to see you're back, keep up the great writing and hope to see more soon.

Hey Rachel, Great stories, loving it so far, i hope you can write some more soon, maybe play out more fantasies. :)

Keep up the great work and hope to see more soon.

Liz

Another lovely chapter - even better than the first.  I liked that he stayed conscious during the transformation this time and got to enjoy the delicious sensations of being feminized.  The concept of a different personality - hair etc. with each different set of boots opens up endless possibilities for continuing this lovely saga.  Hints of "delights" yet to come with the hints of males using his pussy etc.  Keep those stories "cumming"

an excellent start to the story i feel it is goingto get a lot better and i look foreward to reading the next part i would also like to see a lot more into the story how about some enforced bondage and after the honymoon period when he has moved in to find his room was a cage down in her cellar along with a whole lot of other bondage equipment and with her being a lot more force full and then showing her true colours and hime just being treated like a slave with a slave collar etc

Lovely story - very erotic.  Please continue.  I would definitely concur with Loraine's comments.  So nice to have a lovely competent "in charge" woman who feminizes the male without inflicting pain, torture or degradation.

Ooh....Very Nice! I wish I could see even more stories like this one,with the firm & self-confident woman taking control of the sweet,shy,giving male.....downplay the more violent aspects & focus more on the love an admiring,tender man has for the strong role-model woman he wishes he could be.Wonderful! More stories like this please.....

A fun, well written wish-fulfillment story.  Please continued the story if so inspired.

I really enjoyed your story. It was a fun read and I will be looking for more. Thanks for the effort.-monica

I really enjoyed your story, but I would like to see more excitment.  I know it is your story but I would like to see something like... Rachel gets used as a slut and is sold for nights at a time to men, or Rachel is abandoned because Sue gets angry... something that adds a wild twist to the story.  Other than this i really like the story.