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Imitation Wife
by Farah Daye

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Comment by karen marie on 08/29/13
loved your story i wish that would happen to me

Comment by Rosangela on 01/23/13
I told my kids we'd play after I found what I ndeeed. Damnit.

Comment by Jeana on 12/13/11
I thought fidnnig this would be so arduous but it's a breeze!

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 05/24/04
Well, 2 1/2 years since the last comment, so there's probably no hope of a continuance, but ...

<<  What might happen next, my dear readers? >>

...I never can resist:  I would like to see Carrie come out of her daze some way.  Maybe she comes in contact with something Gary is alergic to, and it makes her sick, but negates the drugs.  While she is recuperating she pretends the drugs are still working so that she can find out what's really happening and what her options are.  Will she go along with their plan,  Foil their plan, or manuver them to conform ,with her plan - maybe get them to bankroll her transition through SRS and a nursing degree?  I favor the latter.  Bottom line, she doesn't stay a victim!

Comment by Bobbie on 11/10/01
Enjoyed your story very much made me wish I were much younger.
Know you had to compress the time line some but unfortunately
would have probably enjoyed much more with additional detail.
After all many of us can only imagine the feelings of a female
even as we strive to impersonate them.


Comment by Francesca Barrie on 04/03/01
A very interesting theme and a clever twist. You have left the way open for some great options for continuing. I hope you do.

Comment by Francesca Barrie on 04/03/01
A very interesting theme and a clever twist. You have left the way open for some great options for continuing. I hope you do.



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