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I'm Not Cut Out To Be a Cheerleader 2
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 07/07/03
I really enjoyed this story, as I have all of the Wizard's stories...I am so happy for Paula that she got her wish to become the girl she always was...Keep up the good work, Paula.

Barbara Lynn Terry

Comment by April on 07/05/03
Dear Paula:
This was a fantastic story!!!  Probably your best you have done so far.  It was clear, it moved smoothly, and was intersting and held attention. In fact, I liked it so much, I wanted it to be longer. I think I have read all of your stories, from the first till now.  I can honestly say your stories are becoming very readable and enjoyable. APRIL (A Paula Reader In Louisville)

Comment by Josea on 07/05/03
Who are Rodger and Trish? They appeared in one paragraph and then didn't appear again.



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