ai7Ria I think this is a real great post. Really Cool.

A nice story, nothing nasty or cruel the trouble is you have not done part 2 which is pity

A fun story which I hope will develop.

Great story,Sis. Please continue this theme in a series.

Ellie

An excellent story writen very professional.  I love the plot and the charactors......As a movie it's better than the junk on TV (you know that box with the screen on the front)or the big screen...PLEASE FINISH IT............

great story,very erotic, makes me wish I was the main character. There is nothing better than becoming the woman that is deep inside every man.
Looking forward to the next story!!!!

Hugs
BonnieAnne

Kimber
Where are you?

Great job honey.

Gwen

its a great start to what looks like is going to be a great story
lookforewards to the next part great writing

Kimber,
It's a wonderful story. Please write more.

Well, over two years have gone by since this was posted and I posted my original comments.  I stand by them and would certainly like to see this story continued but, sadly, after so long a time, I doubt it will be.  If this reaches you, Kimber, I would be happy to continue the story if you don't want to.

I just came across this story while searching Storysite for something else, but it's really good. It's got a rather different take on the man-becomes-working-girl situation, and really gets off to a great start.

Sadly, when I looked for the rest of the tale, I found that it's been inactive for a couple of years. I don't know if the author is still around, but if so, I ask, beg, plead that this story should continue.

Kimber

This was a very very good beginning. I don't understand. You have some very good reviews here and yet, the second part has not been posted. Did you abandon the story? OMG! I certainly hope not. You have whetted our appetites with a morsel and now, please, don't deny us the main course. Please continue this story. It is very good.

Barbara Lynn Terry

Kimber:
I have read your story "The Imposter", or more correctly, what
you have so far, It is quite good and there is a real
story here that has a progression to a transition not just "POOF"
and the change is done.

I do have some questions to ask -
-Does Daniel, when he gets back to his desk stay dressed as Louise?
-Does Richard return from his trip to find Daniel as Louise?
-Does Daniel have to drive home as Louise because the cleaning
  crew took his cloths thinking it was Richards things for the
  cleaners?

If you can or have time please continue the next part(s) of the story,
I can hardly wait to read more!

Moving along nicely, good pace
Can't wait for the meeting with his wife!

Love Tina

Hi Kimber.
This is a good story.  I like slow unaware feminization.
Give us more.

I thought this was a well thought out story which, tended to move along very smoothly. My only problem was that more than a few times the author had made mistakes with spelling or grammar which made me either have to re-read the sentence or place a word or two within the sentence to make it sound proper. However, I did find the story to have a certain charm to it and, know that if she has someone go over the story and proof read it before submitting it to look for some spelling mistakes she will be on her way to become one of the better authors on this site.

i love the story it's so wonderfull.  the whole changes with out noticing and how you make it so the principls are all to busy to notice realy .  and the way he seem's split when the means are in front of him to be fem'ed .  i love the set up with him haveing to interact as luise before he starts to become her.  the way he is interduced to the public is very good as to drive it in him to acept what ever fem there is to come .  the choise of construction workers is greate a group of men who want to nail about any thing and here he is looking greate and it only boost's him to lose control and become luise so mouch cleaner and faster.  o by the way your choise of out fit's to start him in is my dream onsomble white silken blouse,tight leather blak skirt, 4inch+ heel's ,stocking ect.  i love it love it love it i want more and please let him ,or is it her now,  take full advantige of the fredricks cloths thank you and write more soon

Kimber

This is a terrific start to a first story.  You have wonderful writing skills already, and allow us to really savor what's going on. I also like the way you have kept things fairly realistic, aside perhaps from mom's special vitamins and the typical airhead guy who can't figure out what's happening to him even as he observes it.

Nonetheless this is very promising.  A little more attention to proof reading would certainly be helpful, but your skills as a writer and story teller are shining through already and just need to be polished.

Brava

Great story and I will be looking forward to the next part.  Please keep up the fine job of writing these stories.

Like how it wasn't an instant change. That the breasts and butt started out small and grew and I really like the talk of getting in the car at the end of part 1. Well descriptive. Look forward to reading more.

Great story so far, can't wait for part two.  Thank you for avoiding the Boss to secretary humiliation scenario.  Please keep Daniel/Louise in charge and don't let him be manipulated by the ladies - too much :-).  Hopefully, an explanation for the effect of the vitamin capsuls, his mother's role in this, and his abrupt switch from virtually not a crossdresser to a full-blown CD will be explained in part II.  Keep up the good work.

Apart from a few typos it was a story with a difference, though god knows why anyone would inject himself with Vitamin B or start dressing for what seems no reason.

Very much surprised, I thought here we go again with the humiliation of the boss, reduced to secretary status while the secretary becomes the boss. Not that I don't mind this formula, if it's well done.
Boy was I wrong, this is a thought out plausible, well written story, that has an excellent beginning; I look forward to the next part.

Well!  This story is a pleasant surprise!  I expected the standard humiliation/Boss turned into Secretary, story and, instead what I GOT was a well written, well thought out, PLAUSABLE scenario!  Well done, Kimber!  I am looking forward to the next chapter of this one!  Thanks for writing it and for posting it!

                                Cathy_t_ said that!

I love it!  You could do an incredible demotion story or bet/dare or blackmail story involving a boss becoming secretary to his former secretary turned boss permanently.  Please try it!  This story is fantastic.  Thank you for it.