Crystal's Story Site
· Return to Story Index Page · Add your Comments ·

Story Comments by Readers

In Her Room
by Jennifer White

Latest comments are shown at top of page.


Comment by cbd washington dc on 03/02/21
Ph8Oi5 I'а†ve learn several excellent stuff here. Certainly price bookmarking for revisiting. I surprise how so much effort you set to create this kind of wonderful informative web site.

Comment by mia pron khalifa on 12/21/18
mF33qr This is a topic which is close to my heart Best wishes! Where are your contact details though?

Comment by any on 02/06/15
Iam A catholic and for her actions she would burn in hell

Comment by crorkz matz on 08/03/14
d0evDM Awesome article.Really looking forward to read more. Awesome.

Comment by take a look at it! on 10/24/13
EtXx3V I really like and appreciate your article post. Really Great.

Comment by this is me on 07/28/12
Exactly suna! Being submissive does NOT (I REPEAT NOT) mean without a backbone. I would be out of there! And if she chose to out me so be it it would only prove she isn't the person to continue giving my heart to of course she already proved that.

This story started out so cool. I saw from the beginning who the sharon his wife was alluding to was and I felt so giddy when I was proved right but then it turned sour in my gut when it became clear her ulterior motives. It is true not every story has a happy ending and this one certainly does not. Betrayal is never a happy ending.


Comment by this is me on 07/28/12
The authors of this type of story simply don't get it right. When his wife asked him how he felt after the threesome he is going to invariably say he felt 'BETRAYED'. He may go along with the feminization but he will seek new employment and then an apartment to get away from her.

I'm not a catholic and I certainly don't know much about their more ilicit (and arcane) practices, but it strikes me as the person(woman) buying indulgences with her faux support of her husbands fetish. She is trying to escape guilt for her affair. I'd be out of there.


Comment by Donnie on 01/10/10
Great story. I almost wish it had gone on to include his/her life as a wet nurse, but better to little than to much I supose,,,

Comment by juliej on 02/21/08
good story well written it was a very good set up from start to end

Comment by dee on 10/08/07
a very well done story that really makes the point that you cannot
have it both ways... you either are or your not. the whole gender
and sex thing can be extremely confusing especially when someone else
is driving...

Comment by annie on 09/20/07
Thanks Jennifer,

I enjoyed every word and certainly can relate. His dreams are my dreams. I might have liked to have read when he gave his first head how fulfilling it was, how female and submissive he felt as if this is what he was born to do----yes to please. Same goes for his first penenetration---yes it hurt a little at first but oh what extacy, what an orgasm. I'd love to share my email address with any like minded lady. I'm very much in the closet and it's lonesome there.

lipstick kisses,

annie


Comment by juliej on 09/18/07
a story of understanding &symphony good story

Comment by suna on 08/25/07
I always cringe when I see a line like this ...

--Sean wanted to cry as he looked at the pictures. He felt a need to destroy them. If Rachel ever showed them to anyone, his life would be over. He looked at her helplessly.--

His life is over if he does not leave that very moment !!! any threat to expose some guy and in most stories he always folds... once there is a threat it may as well happen because soon enough it will.

But tis only a story and it won't be the writers view if he does *shrug*..

An average of breed story, done well enough.




Add your Comments

      The importance of reader feedback cannot be overstated.   Authors rely on it to improve their future works, and it gives them the incentive to write more stories if they know that their hard work has been appreciated.  I am not saying that comments must all be lauditory.  Authors often appreciate honest, constructive criticism over simple remarks like 'Great story', although simple praise is appreciated also.  There is no limit on how much you can enter in the 'comments' box.   Sentences will automatically word wrap at the end of the line so please do not use your carriage return/enter key except at the end of your paragraphs.

      It is not necessary to use your real name here, and, email addresses are optional.  Posting your email address will allow the author to thank you for taking the time to post your comments, and/or discuss critiques and address possible concerns. 

      Be forewarned that abusive remarks and language will be removed, and the posters may be banned from this AND other areas of StorySite.



Name :
E-Mail : (Optional & Confidential)
Comments :
 
  

Please report any problems to Crystal