DS9uaH You, my pal, ROCK! I found exactly the info I already searched everywhere and simply could not find it. What an ideal web site.

LBPaxJ Really enjoyed this post.Really thank you! Great.

what a brilliant story just loved this one more please

just loved this one. great fantasy for later on !!!!!!!!!! oh my

chilling ,I'm sure this crazy stuff happans in real life , I'm curious does the mistress every just get murder by the sub to even the score?

Bad,bad,bad story!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Simply outstanding -- this Mistress knows how to train and treat a sissy maid. Now that I have read this -- with great care, I might add -- my sissy maid Priscilla Ann is in for some very harsh treatment next time she screws up. BRAVO, Mistress, BRAVO!

what  a story and what a plight. Great fantasy for readers. thanks

just WOW!!!

so far a great story please continue

a great startreading for a second time

a brilliant story of consequecs ifany part of his agreement is broken this story can go on longer and is well worth reading more please

I stand by my comments with the exception that after rereading the story it makes great sence and is so far a brilliant story more please

this i feel is a strong minded story far to much for me to even consider his big mistake was not putting limits to the contract on what she can &cannot do but overall a great story well writen

i have never read anything so scary and i hope to never encounter such situation yet it pulls at my deepest desires

an excellent story wellwritten and described he did not know what he let himself infor i look foreward th the next installment with bated breath

an interesting start to what looks like a good story I will comment further as I read more

I just want to apologize if what I said contributed to your negative feelings toward Storysite.  My intentions were to give you constructive criticism, but I'm sorry if it didn't come across that way.  The comment from Erica was uncalled for and inaccurate.

Also see my detailed apology in the Cyberboard.

Hugs,
-Ami

I looked and looked and i couldn't find any stories by Erica June. I wonder why. I fail to see how the English and spelling could be considered "awful" as you have failed to provide any examples.
 This is all a moot point. The best solution is simply to no longer post my stories here. Others have enjoyed them quite a bit and have told me so.
 Whereas at this site I have recieved no feedback for more than a year and when i do it is negative.

Please, have somebody edit this!  The English and the spelling are both awful.

You've got some really good ideas, and the story is both erotic and interesting.  However, you have chosen a third-person, present tense format for the story which is both difficult to write properly and not very well suited for long stories.  The problem, you see, is that it is very tedious for the reader.  

I applaud you for wanting to be different, but I honestly got too exhausted after reading the first chapter to continue to the next ones.  I think you have a talent, so keep writing, but change your format.  I have to go take a nap now.