G19P3u Major thanks for the post.Thanks Again. Really Great.

agree with most of the comments above but there is a serious lack of emotional content from all characters especially David who would have been confused, then furious and eventually vengeful himself aftr going through a period of rationalisation then concluding that Karen and Dara had gone too far in showing him the error of his ways.

How long till he takes a steak knife and plunges into their hearts????

Sure the heavy handedness on the part of these delightfully vengeful Females lies somewhat beyond the realm of the believable, BUT it IS so much fun to contemplate such fate occurring to the male of the species.  There IS some chance many males so feminized and unmanned just might fall pray to the "Stockholm Syndrome" and find themselves broken and girlishly devoted to their disdainful Female captors and rulers.  YESSSS!  Makes a cool modern urban legend, don't some of you you agree?

Mistresses Karen and Dara have certainly fixed Cynetta, but good. I particulary related to the rules they set for their new maid; especialy those relating to out of the house experiences, i.e. having to use public transportation, having to dress in very short skirts and skyscraper heels (which will certainly result in many humiliations for Cynetta), and having to visit the beauty parlor regularly. Bravo, Ladies.

this story moved way way too fast. A male forcefully administered hormones and castrated and then surgically reassigned would not awake so resigned.  He would wake in a quiet rage that would eventually get public notice complete with all the legal  problems. In the real world women who have secretly put hormones in their husbands food and sat back to watch the slow and disastrous change in him have been outed .. BUT not all husbands once started in a transformation will necessarily want it to stop. This story would have been more to my liking it the bad girls and gradually put a fem fem transformation into play until the poor bastard started to have desires appear and a wish for castration became his desire. Castration and hormone therapy and total feminization are a constant in my fantasy world so I did like that part except it went too fast in a sterile room ...as for slavery and servitude   NO!  but hey it was a good story and it had the desired effect on my libido and penis.  thanks

Great story, but needs to go further. After all, the proof of the pudding is in the taste and Cynetta needs a very real taste of life as live-in maid to two vindictive women.

THE PUNISHMENT WAS MERITED, BUT MAYBE A BIT OVERBHOARD. THE REAL
QUESTION HERE IS WHETHER A SCORNED BITCH HAS AS LITTLT INTEGRETY AS
A SPOILED BASTARD.

intersting needs more explanation &continuance well done

an intersting revenge senirio the story was fast past but ok i stand by my previous comments

I expect both women to be dead in a few weeks ....  The new S/he has no reason to stay and after s/he is past the shock it will all be over.

a second reading of this story a lot of the things done to him were illegal but revenge is what its all about i feel that this story could go a lot further than it has but a great story overall

great story i would have liked more to it like exploring the room checking the windows to see if they are barred se what type of lock was on the door and every thing else to try and formulate a way to get revvenge it would be a long and hard ride to get revenge and or escape to try and claim back everything theire must be some paper work some where relating to everything  but i felt this was a great story and could go on far longer than jusyt the one part well done please think about rearranging it all and making it longer  it well written and a pleasure to read

I had determined what my comment was to be.  Imagine my surprise when I went to the comments page and found I had read this story before and commented.  The comment I had decided to make this time was exactly the same as the one already there,  ...

<< "As I've said several times today, you now own not a single thing! Refuse my terms, quit right now and out you go free as a bird... totally naked. You don't even keep the rubber band holding your ponytail up. ... My game, my rules, now, Cynetta! Wanta quit? Just say so!"  >>

... that David should say, at this point, "OK, I quit."  I think it would be really interesting to write a new story based on that decision.  Would they really let her go after spending all that money on her?  Would they let her go but then not let her be "free as a bird", try to sabatoge her?  As you wrote, David may be (have been) a bastard, but he's not stupid.  Naked and destitute, but free, could he make it as a woman?  Would this new woman be a bitch as David was a bastard, or would she have learned her lesson?  Could be really interesting.

Good story, but where does it lead? Would have liked to read about how her/his sex life became reoriented.

She should have walked out of their naked when given the choice.

good story it was amazing how the tables were turned needs a bit more expanding worth another installment

I liked the story, but then ,I'm easy to please. It would have been nice to have expounded a little farther into Cynetta's new life, like getting ogled when out shopping for her Mistress'. Sometimes too, having Cynetta wear super high heels all the time is a bit extreme. It's your story and I have no quarrel with it, but having Cynetta wear shoes with a smaller heel can be just as stimulating as 4 or 5 inchers.

Prefer a more loving relationship - less slavery.

Bravo! I'm Glad I'm not the only one who finds the Maid's Quarters a big turn on.A part 2 is much needed,say 5 years later.I like the attention to detail, more make-up would be nice tho!

The good writing in this story didn't make up for the typical punishment plot line of this type of fiction. The women are just on the side of excess in meting out their punishment for the treatment of Karen. Virtual slavery is uncalled for in any circumstance for any reason. It makes the women as bad or worse than he was to begin with.