Hi caroline.
Very good story.
I loved the fact Sarah make the SRS.
Kisses.
Silvia.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. The mixing of his life before and after worked for me. I know the more I dress and use toys the more I desire a male lover. The few that I have had, have been boyfriends on dates and out before ever heading to bed with them. I could so enjoy this story and the feelings.
Thank you.

Loved it sweet story

Dear Caroline:

I loved your story yesterday, and your loving nature is repeated here, but this one lost me halfway through.  There was an empathy connection between Dave & Sarah that needed to be explored and wasn't.  It feels to me that for Dave to want to be Sarah, he needed to know his wife and HER feelings better than he seemed to.  And, we should have learned more about the exact circumstances of her death, Dave's guilt and anger.  In short, I think the whole story about Steph after Sarah's death might have been best put off for a sequel whilst Dave's range of feelings and memories of Sarah were explored more fully.  

I'll stop here, because I now feel as if I'm rewriting your story, and I would never wish to do that unsolicitedly.  If you wish to rework this and wish to bounce some ideas off me, please feel free to email sherylsteinhardt@yahoo.com.  Otherwise, take from this what you find useful, and feel free to leave the rest.

Love & Hugggs,
Sheryl S.