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In Service to Isis
by Michelle Rose

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Comment by cheap oem software on 02/11/12
pvaBic Post brought me to think, went to mull over!!....

Comment by Emma on 08/05/04
This was an exciting tale.. maybe the guy chnaged too quiclkly! How I wished this could be me !! I would love to help write the story.. be the person in your stories!!

Love

Emma
xx  In the UK

Comment by Pippa K. on 08/04/04
I see you have this story marked "complete".  While it's a lovely little tale which could well stand alone, it almost demands more chapters.  Unless she's planning on dying of starvation in the cave, she's going to have to leave and go somewhere else.  Her archaelogical party is still searching for their missing colleague.  She can't survive the desert without them or meeting up with another group.  There are lots of possibilities here!  Please continue this great little story!



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