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Instant Breasts
by Josie Brian

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Comment by Paul GF on 09/15/07
once again another great story that lives up to your high standard.

I agree that this seems slightly more realistic except for the product. There is a slight flavouring of sentimentality which does not spoil the story.  It is an interesting touch that both boy and girl suffer but girl gets her revenge!

please keep writing these great stories.


Comment by julej on 08/03/07
i stand by my previous comments well done more please

Comment by juliej on 01/25/06
a great story more please this is intersting and well written what some sisters are like it was an enjoyable story as well

Comment by Bobbie on 08/10/04
Weather it works or not is a question Joe, but such a product does exist, the time to do the job is somewhat longer and the results I am told are somewhat lasting.
Loved the story, yes a few question marks but well written to me.
Will be anxious for the follow up.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 08/08/04
Me think he/she likes skirts and bras

Comment by joe smith on 08/08/04
Very intresting story but the first one was bit more realist which gave it the "wow" feel. No I'm not saying that the gel was the problem it was just that he put on the skirt when he went to the coach, wouldn't he put on his pants instead? The story has potential but why would the police let them kiss, wouldn't they brake it up. Sorry it's a good story but not great like the last one. Though bravo on the running part where he thought he was enjoying it. Hope to see a second part. Also you seem to use the word "Dimwit" in both stories and its always a little brother getting into the girls clothing and it even uses your name, did you have a little pervert brother like that or do you wish for one?

P.S.: sassy I don't think you'll find any to bad as it would be a great product.

Comment by SassySue on 08/08/04
Great idea.  Where can I get some of that gel?

Please continue the story.  I can't wait to find out what happens when Tracy gets hold of Martin again.

SS



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