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Comment by ashley on 08/10/13
not bad. LIked the others better. Comment by Randee on 12/25/08 Pretty well writen, but I do agree that the word you are looking for Comment by juliej on 05/16/04 a good start to a good story what had he let himself in for look foreword to the next part Comment by Diane on 01/17/04 being a avid cd for many years I only wish to find someone like this that would make me their sissy bitch. I enjoy stories like this please keep up the great work. Comment by karla m on 01/14/04 I love it ,please keep going on with your story Comment by Sheryl S. on 01/12/04 Dear Danielle 13: Comment by Dora on 01/12/04 Please learn to use the word THEN in your work. THAN is not correct and makes it much harder to read. |
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