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In Too Deep
by Jean M. Chambers

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Comment by Mistress Meredith on 06/28/09
A cocktail waitress; how utterly devine -- the perfect comeuppance for a macho moron.

Comment by Brandi on 02/04/04
I just read this story but couldn't find any more to it, it definitely deserves a second part where we get to see what he is up to now, maybe a few months or year as he lives as a woman and roommate.

Comment by tinkerbell sissy joshie on 12/29/02
hi....I luv your new story...!

I think MR. macho cocktail waitress is gonna get pinched on his cute panties by big, strong, muscular MEN, now..!!

*BLUSH*

tinkerbell joshie

Comment by Axanar on 12/27/02
You and A Happy Wife are my favorite writers on this site.  This is just one more reason why!  A good office femdom piece (secretary and boss switch places) would be easily within your grasp.  Keep up the fantastic work!



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