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Into The Pool
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Comment by Sam on 01/26/14
great story,i really enjoyed reading it.I thought that maybe at the end that Jenna would tell Kevin,that she was infact Mistress Nina.But all in all a very good read,i enjoy reading all your stories,would love to know where you get all your ideas from...maybe you could let me know sometime....willsamuel@hotmail.co.uk Comment by Johnny Valentine on 12/28/08 I enjoyed your story very much indeed - very cleverly written, a brilliant plot device, and exquisitely, teasingly unfolded. I'm off to read your others. Well done! Comment by juliej on 04/27/08 brilliant story reading it again it was great Comment by juliej on 07/23/07 what a great story well done Comment by juliej on 03/04/06 this is a story that is well deserved of many compliments ms white is an excellent writerthe stories to date i have read are very good a slow revenge process, by an email mistress whom he didnot realise was his assistant didnot even put things together what a way to go who says the female is not devious and sneaky a briiliant story well read and it took me the time to read it well done excellent story i will read more as time goes in the only stries so i do not like are the magical transformations stries the real sticks &stones are the best type of stories i enjoyed every minit of this story, well done &well writtenthankyou Comment by Midge on 07/01/05 With "Into the Pool," Ms. White delivers a story that is delightfully paced. Similar to her protagonist, Jenna, the authoress simply will not be rushed in the feminization of Kevin. She takes her time in recounting her tale and for this the reader is thankful. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/08/05 I enjoyed Kevin's gradual transition, and, in the end, I think Linda really got what Kevin wanted all along; if it wasn't, he wouldn't have gone along with it when it became clear that obeying Mistress Nina was going to be just as bad as obeying her in terms of everyone seeing him transition, pictures and reality becoming the same. Did Jenna and the other secretaries actually come to like Linda and treat her more and more as their equal as her transition progresses? I hope so. Comment by samantha2 on 05/08/05 excelklent long story ,just how i like them .Keep it up Comment by Axanar on 05/07/05 CLASSIC! BRAVO! ABSOLUTELY PERFECT! |
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