Ok Becca, I know you'll never end this story.
I just would like to tell you, this isn't fair with your readers!
Finish this story. PLEASE!
Silvia.

An excellent story and like many others I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Will this story continue? I find it very intriguing.

                    Vivien

    Iam glad it ended. I was getting to sleepy to read any more then what you had writen.       Hydie

Come on Becca, when is there going to be a conclusion to this story. A good start but we are left hanging.  Being its over four years old it needs to be completed.

Supper story,please tell the hold story, looking forward to reading on It is so swett. Hugges Gail

Why have you not continued this tale ?  It is not badly written and there is nothing objectionable or wrong with it.  I just found the first chapters and noted the dates of them.  You have left us all hanging in the air like spiders looking for a flyfeast.  

Briar

Not much new here. I agree with Wyndorf: a really nice and sweet story, good telling and sympathetic characters.

The begin might be a bit rocky, thought: Is this guy supposed to be tough or not? And why do tough (or not) guys think about that? Showing would have been better than telling. Isn't he also a bit young for his thoughts? Before you told us, I was thinking the narrator is at least in his 30s.

But the later chapters reward for that.

The only problem I had with this story is that it seems very pre-determined: the narrator will come to accept his t-girl and everybody will live happily ever after.

Please, please don't let it finish so fast and easy! Your story is much too nice for that!

i swear i must be blonde, either that or someone changed my hair rinse while i wasn't looking. my other comment was about chapter 1 not 2 some how i got it loaded as chapter two (shrugs) any way i was looking at the synopsis and realised that it was one and not two i had read. lol anyway i didnt chew my nails off as i promptly read the next chapter. so your not getting a bill. yes definately a winner here. cant wait for more hint hint huggles from..?? hmm i did know my name its starts with p i think,.gigglz

i just finished reading chapter 2 of prince charming.  i hate you, o really do, lol leaving me hanging like that , now i'll have to get new nails, as i'm sure mine will be all chewed off in frustration till you post the next chapter.  all kidding aside this is going to be a great story i can tell, you certainly have mastered the cliff hanger part. lolol  keep up the great work huggles from prue p.s. can i send you the bill for a new set of nails...gigglz

This story really has the signs of becoming a wonderful serial.
I'm a sucker for sweet and sentimental stories where the t-girl finds
her man and love will eventually bloom (well, at least that's what I hope will happen :-)). The story is really well-written, and the days when there's no new chapter in the "new stories" section are hard to get through. Well, I'm hooked after only three chapters!