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Is This Really What You Want?
by Anyport

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Comment by thisisme on 06/05/13
Tragic abuse of trust. Lamentable lack of professional ethics as well. Not to mention erin lied! He would have to have retained her services himself in order for her claim that her actions were in his best interest to be applicable. Neither her or cheryl have any legal standing.

Comment by Sujeet on 07/09/12
At last, smooene who knows where to find the beef

Comment by Silvia. on 10/18/10
This is a very, very bad story!
How could you write this?
Silvia.

Comment by Mistress Meredith on 02/05/09
Perfectly planned domination and feminization by Mistress Cheryl. A tale well told.

Comment by juliej on 04/15/07
the intersting part of this story is the lack of bullishnesson thew according to the stories interesting wellin part of greg who needed this treatment it was a good bribe to be forced with the choice of go along or go out

Comment by julie j on 03/28/05
the story is good bases itself on the files found on gregs computer very intresting the twist about sammie was not expected butagain ituses the persona to intrgrate the systen i am not surethat iwould have been that easy buts its amazing how things work out well done

Comment by julie on 03/04/04
its amazing what people hide on computers an excellent story good reading cheryl was amazamed at what she found and elected to use it as a training tool  he learnt a hard lesson and with the hypnotic trance at the end what a finish he will be used like that for the rest of his life unless cheryl gets bored with him and passes him on to freinds well done



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