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I Think I Need A Drink
by Virginia Kane

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Comment by Doyle on 01/30/10
Awesome story take it where your talent wuill let it go please, it has good heart and seems so realistic

Comment by marcus on 01/07/07
Very clever, well done I like this story.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 01/14/01
I really liked this story.  It seems so trite and stereotypical, though nice, at first, but you let just a little sinister thread trickle in.  How much of his femininizine is really at his own will?  Just how long did the doctor, hired by Lou, keep him out?  Long enough to do surgical modifications?  Long enough to plant false memories.  Why did Joe, REALLY want Lou not to contact his family himself.  The bulk of the material leads the reader to believe this is just a nice little tale of a concerned spouse and a good friend helping Lou to realize his own best, feminine, destiny ... BUT, there's that little sinster thread.  Brilliant!

Comment by paul jutras on 01/07/01
excellent tale and entertaining characters.



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