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loved your story, hope to see more written. lots of luck and love to you.                jenny

You are gifted, girl. I loved the story and the way you weaved the story along with awarenesss of self esteem. I could relate and did not want the story to end, Could our heroine takeover the company one day with the support of the women? I'd love it.

Please write more.

Paula

Hi Lori!
I liked your story.
I hope you write a happy end for her.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Thank you for this wonderful adventure! I found it carefully thought-out, and expertly articulated! I felt like I was thinking and doing what I have always aspired to become, as I was reading and experiencing the very "thoughts" of our heros' new life beginning! I'm anxiously looking forward to future chapters!

I really like this story, and only wish we'd see more of it!  Despite a somewhat traditional setup, there's a freshness to the approach that avoids the typical cliches.

Dear Lorraine,

you have set the scene extremely well, the poor hero(in)is employed, and you have stopped.  Why?  It is getting really interesting.  If you just carry on the way you started it will be fine.  Dont worry about where she is going - a character in a story develops her own personality and things happen without the poor creator / author having much control.  Once created, she is out of her bottle and will make her own way in the fantasy world she creates for herself!

Please continue.

Briar

Nice story. You did a good job developing the character and explaining key points of the story.  Kelly seems like she is more transsexual than transgender.  Her willingness to accept life as a female and abstract thinking about being a lesbian show that she perhaps would not minding transitions and becoming female.  Keep coming with the installments, but try to speed them up please.


Thanks for a very enjoyable story

Lori Michelle

Wonderful story. I had to read parts one and two again to refresh myself so part three would make sense. Another installment pleas and a little bit longer as well as maybe more on two interactions Mr Scott and Melissa, a double romance if you will. Let Kelly fall in love with both of them.

This is a really nice story so far, but the small size of the installments and the months between postings are a little annoying.

In the third installment the story is starting to pick up speed with Kelly begining to interact with other people.  I look forward to reading more about Kelly's interaction with the shy Mellisa as well as Mr. Scott.

Keep up the good work!
SS

You have a nice build up, and all of your heroine's actions seem to fall into a good pattern.  I can't wait for the first day, the interview, the expressing of qualifications, the journey into a lunchroom with "the girls" or to the Ladies toilet. Little incidentals for the clothes, handkerchieves, scarves perhaps protective outer clothing.  How is she practicing her speach?  That is going to be critical in her exploits.
The character could use a little developing.  Is she shy, gregarious, over whelming?  And she is going to need an helper, someone to double check her, and help adjust for small faus pas that one can't notice on oneself.
Very good so far. Thank you for sharing.

absolutely a fab beginning. am interested how kelly porceeds

Oh this story has excellent potential.

Looking forward to the continuing parts

This has long been a fantasy of mine - to be able to get a job as a woman.