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It's Called Steppton, Not Steppford
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Comment by Molly on 04/28/08
If you liked this satire, may I recommend 'The Games' by Sarah Bayen? It's the same idea, with a much sharper edge. Comment by DEE on 10/03/07 GREAT SHORT STORY THAT I REALLY ENJOYED READING. Comment by Shiela Brier on 03/18/05 Enjoyed, would have liked it to be a little longer with more detail. Comment by not michael on 07/25/04 Michael: Try reading the story, it's actually a perfectly heterosexual relationship they're in there. Both ways :) Comment by sarah acklin on 07/24/04 A cool little story. Nice twist at the end. Comment by michael on 07/24/04 Big suggestion: Have a category for when there is a homosexual element in the story. That way, I and many others will be given notice so we can stay away from them. Do you understand that there are a lot of people who, if given warning, whoul dnever read a story with homosexual elements. It is an mark of the perversity of homosxuality that you won't advetise your stories as such. You obviously think that there is a secret appeal to your perversity. Sneak it into a story and people wont be able to resist. Sick. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/24/04 WOW! Good scary one! neat ending. Comment by Dillon Doe on 07/23/04 You know there is something about this place just from the title.. you kinda have an inkling of whats happening.. but you dont know the full extent until the very end.. |
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