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It Was My First Time
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Aleesha on 02/02/10
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Comment by Sally on 08/24/09
One-two-three, look and see, how I twirl, like a girl.
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Comment by DEE on 10/06/07
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Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/09/07
Great story Janet. Mom knows more than Tim. She gets him a job asa girl after his sister catches him in one of her dresses. His only breakdown is when the breast forms are attached. You made quick work of Janet's romance and transformation to womanhood. You can easily expand this story. But it's cute as is. Makes me wonder about [YOUR FIRST TIME]

Comment by rone welles on 02/19/07
Some stories are timeless this is one of them ...
great story nice ending .... dream on ...

thank you xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox Rone :)


Comment by Jacqui on 09/15/01
I loved the story so much! I was so happy to read at the end that Janet wanted to go to nursing school, and that he  finally became a woman! I was really glad for her! I liked the natural way the story moved, from his reluctance to take the job, to his moving on to the medic section, and finally, at the end, saying he is going to go to nursing school! I think I would have liked the story more if Janet had enjoyed being a girl more from the beginning, although I understand the change had to be gradual. I just like it though when the boy starts to like being a girl after he is forced to be one by his parents or someone else. I liked how she had so much help from his mother. Thanks for the story, I'll be reading others, and I'll try and comment on them too! I really like to read stories about boys dressing as girls, because that is just what I liked to do ever since I was a young teenager! So, thanks again, and keep up the good work! Great site! xxx



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