Your story was very good and the sex  between them was described very well. I don't like long stories but I would have loved to have read how Deborah came out to her family and seeing them support her and then reading on her journey to becomimg a complete woman and then reading on her marriage to Jacob.

My second story. They seem to get better.

loved your story.  Even the mispellings and grammer errors, i'm wondering if this was you in real life because it sounded like it came from your experience.  If not you have a great imagination and i hope you continue writing.

sincerely yours Julie LaRue

PS if you e-mail me back be sure to use "sissie stories" in the title

I love your work. I have read most of your stories and have seen you become a better writer over the past 5 years.  With your talent and imagination you take the reader through a rapidly developed transition (important in short stories) from a male persona to discovery of his/her true self -- a total female in every sense of the word except one.  My only helpful critism is that you should have your work edited for the few minor grammar and spelling errors.
I'd be happy to offer my services for free, I was formally an editor for an internatioinal magazine.

Thank you for the many hours of vicarious sexual and emotional fulfillment that I've enjoyed as Debi and Karen-Anne.

It is amazing that someone would come to this site and make such a horrible comment.  What did he expect to read? ...The Bobbsey Twins?  You're Debi Leigh, not Laura Lee (Hope).  

It is ironic that such an intolerant remark would be scribbled on these pages so close to MLK Day.  Martin Luther King, Jr. said, "We accept finite disappointment, but we must never lose infinite hope."

You wrote a very elegant story.  Accept that there are intolerant people in the world who don't understand that everyone is 'different'.  With your same eyes, accept that there are many, many others who are sick and tired of bigotry, intolerance and abusive behavior.  You have the absolute right to be who you are and express yourself in any way that isn't damaging to others.  Rejoice in your very special 'difference' that makes you a wonderful person.

One can only imagine the pain and suffering in your detractor's life that would lead him to write such a cruel remark.  Your story theme was disclosed in the teaser.  Why would someone who read that teaser and didn't like that type of story...read it?

The world isn't logical.

It is plain to see from your pictures that you are a sensitive person who is reaching out to the world to have fun.

I enjoyed your story, even though I rarely enjoy m2m fiction.  It was anything but disgusting.  I embraced your fun and enjoyed the story of young love, beautifully told.

Keep writing.  You can change the world, even if it takes some pain.

Love to you.

Jill