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Jack and Jill
by Vickie Tern

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Comment by J on 12/21/11
I really love your stories they seem so realistic. I thought Jane should have been able to get the inheirtance from the uncle, but it is fiction I guess. All your stories are great and realistic to me. I hope you keep writing great stories like this one and all the other ones I read from you so far. ( I still have a few more to read of yours ) Thanks so much J .

Comment by SassySue on 03/13/05
This story, like all of Vickie's, was very well written and well told.  I am particularly happy that the hero(ine) got a measure of revenge on her former wife.  

However, I'm sorry that Jack/Jane did not realize sooner what Jill was up to.  He should have left as soon as she burst in on him with Darlene.  I've stayed in a loveless marriage and know what a hell that is.  And Jack didn't have the excuse of staying for the sake of the kids like I did.

Unlike Jezzi, I'm happy that Jane did not have the operation and hope that she regains use of his/her penis and finds someone like Darlene who is happy to have her as she is.

SS


Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 02/27/05
I liked this one the first time and I liked it this time.  Finally the wimp turns, becomes Jane the temporary bitch and out-ovaries Jill the full time bitch.  Jane has become her own independent woman whether she has the operation or not.  She's nobody's wimp, nobody's sissy!  This one ROCKS Vickie!  major hugs from Jezzi

(I rather like to imagine Jane deciding to go all the way and then having  a meaninful and happy lesbian relationship.)

Comment by sarah acklin on 02/26/05
My first Vickie Tern story and still my favorite. It had so many great elements that at the time were new and fresh. I liked the fact that our heroine was able to get some measure of revenge but chose in the end to continue to live as a girl.



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