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Jack And Jill
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Comment by Angie on 09/04/15
Nice story. Thanks! Comment by Broni Marsh on 07/23/06 I loved this story. I do hope you will consider continuing it as it has definite possibilities for several continuing relationships among the characters. Thanks for sharing your talent. Comment by Kristy Lynn Fitzpatrick on 07/08/06 Completely enjoyable in every way. Very fast paced vignette but fully complete. Could be continued yet doesn't have to be. You have a flexible way of writing and really innocent as well. Comment by debbie on 07/07/06 great story you hit all the right topics without going to far Comment by Jamie E. Burgess on 07/05/06 I liked this story. Yes, it is fantasy and yes the hero saves the maiden and yes the maiden isn't put off by her neighbor's symbolic need to connect with the other sex. Also the hero is so presentable she fools the cops. But the nicest part is the loving acceptance by the neighbor and her friends. It opens a new world for Jack/Jill. Comment by Carolyn Renee on 07/03/06 Lovely, lovely story. Please follow with a sequel soon. I am so envious of Jill! Love & Kisses Carolyn Renee Comment by Rita on 07/03/06 This is a fantastic story! Please don't let it end here. You've got to get the boys involved in a dress-up session with Jill! Pretty please? |
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