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Jackie O'Lantern
by Jezzi Belle Stewart

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Comment by Dianna on 03/13/08
I think that they went overboard at the end. Yes he was a horrid man, but to subject him to those same horrors is to invite vengeance upon themselves.

Yes she will learn the lesson. But what will happen to her afterwords? She will grow up like any child who was molested and she will end up seeking out revenge on her tormentors, and those who put her in such a position.

Just like any other victim.

So we come full circle, don't we?














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