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James to Jane, The Hard Way
by Lovelongrednails

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Comment by suba lube on 08/12/18
UlZdiG There is certainly a great deal to learn about this issue. I love all the points you made.

Comment by this sheat on 03/04/17
opfcuh I was able to find good advice from your content.

Comment by amazed on 02/10/15
As soon as he had any time to himself he would have been off and the police would be providing chains for her and her friends This is against his will it is not love it is hate. [SICK BITCHS]His mother would cut her throut.

Comment by link building on 07/18/14
ijveS1 I cannot thank you enough for the article.Really looking forward to read more. Much obliged.

Comment by Adam on 02/20/11
Wow! Fantastic, I would love this to happen to me. Great story, please can we have part two :-)
Adamx

Comment by "Missy," Susan Pauline on 12/27/10
Dear Ms. Love-Long-Red-Nails,

I enjoyed your story. At first, I questioned some of the body modifications descriptions, then I realized this is fiction.

I live a real-life, that is close to Jane's but I'm the only wage-earner. Hence, I make good use of my, "closet." At home, I am my Mistress/Wife's Housemaid/husband. My Mistress/Wife likes to present me as, "a guy in a dress," rather than, "passable." I got used to the laughing at, and finger-pointing by the kids in the Supermarket, the Laundromat, et cetera. Our neighbors all know, that I'm the Housemaid/husband. I'm a nine-year cancer survivor, so I don't need any restraints. I'll never, "tent-out," my Uniform Dress or skirt again.

I'm sorry, I got off-track, it's just that there are so many parts of Jane's new Lifestyle, that are the same as mine. I, too, am not allowed to speak without permission. The only words out of my mouth are, "Yes, Mistress," and, Thank You, Mistress."

If Mistress had any market-able job skills and could be a wage-earner, then for sure, I would end up as Jane did. I would willingly have gone through what James went through and no locks would have been needed.

I'm a Graduate of the Maid Academy, Class of November 2005. My Girlfriend/Wife became my Mistress/Wife.

I agree with Greta's observations. I would hsve liked to have read about the training and the, "corrective actions," taken for mistakes. How did Jane learn to cook? Who taught her how to clean? I'd, also, would have enjoyed reading the descriptions of Jane's new clothes. It is, however, a very good start and thoroughly enjoyable to read.

Sisterly yours,

"Missy," Susan Pauline


Comment by Jane Doe. on 10/25/10
Oh how sweet it reads, such is the way of life for Mistresses and thier sissy maids.

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 03/11/09
My Mistress has ordered me to tell you how PLEASED I am at Jane's complete transformation. Mistress Meredith agrees that not only must my appearence as Her maid be perfect at all times -- including perfectly straight stocking seams -- but that every aspect of my household duties must meet Her rigid standards, or else. Mistress Meredith ordered me to tell you she hopes to read more about new sissy maid Jane, including any transgressions the girl might make and the remedies you have chosen to ensure they do not re-occur.

Comment by Mistress Meredith on 01/06/09
Nicely done -- Jane sounds like a good little maid, as well she should be.

Comment by Ian on 04/22/08
Great story, I agree with Greta that it started out well but then seemed to get to the end a bit quick. I only wish my wife would take this sort of lead with me. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.

Comment by WannabeGinger on 04/18/08
Love the body you're wearing, girl!!   Let's have some more!
LOL WbG xx

Comment by Clarissa on 04/15/08
MMMM, that's one hot, hot, story!   Go get him gurrllll.   Kisses, C

Comment by greta on 04/15/08
The start was great but towards the end you moved, for my taste, a bit too quick. You could have nicely described the two months between taking Jane home and her becoming so adept as to give a pedicure. You could have showed us the learning curve including the corrections, punishments, etc.
The story certainly deserves to continue and I hope to see more of you.

hugs and kisses, greta


Comment by Jack on 04/14/08
Yes, please continue the transformation.  We need to know what she is doing for you and to you and what gorgeous outfits you have her in.

Jacki


Comment by Karen on 04/14/08
Great story. Please continue to write more of them. Karen



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