Not good, not bad!

A story idea: A teen girl and her younger brother (about age ten) go on a brief vacation to a working dude ranch.  One day, after a time of light chores done by the guests, the ranch has scheduled an evening square dance. The girl and her brother go to their respective rooms to prepare. Both are wearing flannel shirts, jeans, and boots.  The girl removes her boots, loosens her belt, pulls down the zipper, and frees her beautiful gams from their denim boy-prison, replacing them with a perky, swirly little denim-and-lace miniskirt for dancing, and then puts the boots back on.  The brother then enters, sees her, and comments on how pretty she is.  She then asks if he would like to go to the dance dressed as she is, and, surprisingly, he agrees.  She finds him a similar skirt, lends him a pair of her pretty panties, and covers his short hair with a kerchief. What remains is up to the author.

I enjoyed your story. Thanks very much.

It was sweet of Jamie's young female friend to give him a good suck in the backseat of the car.  It would have been nice if his auntie had done the same for him, too, at some point.  I thought she was going to when she pulled down his cum-soaked panties, but I guess she figured by then that it was too late for both of them to enjoy it.

This precious little tale reminds me of a country squaredance/line-dancing series that one of the cable TV nets ran a few years ago.  I used to watch it just to see the ladies twirl their dance skirts, especially those more daring gals who sported sweet teeny little pettied numbers hardly longer than a 1950's little girl's party dress, though the longer full skirts were elegantly nice.  What I couldn't "dig" were the tight-fitting denim minis (no swirl to them), or, worse, those who sported oversized, clunky men's jeans.  No celebration of femininity there.

Darling your best story so far, I love the dress and petticoat stories and this one was just WONDERFULL please MORE, MORE, huggs Aunty Wendy

Very sweet and sweetly sexy. Just a touch of light sex to keep the reader interested. I kept hoping that Aunt Zelda would "lend a hand" now and then...but it was presented just fine in the story. Wish you would write the second chapter.

Jamie is SOOOOOOOOOOOO fortunate to have compassionate, understanding female relatives who know that the wonderful thrill of feminine finery may sometimes cause a boy to experience a little release of wetness in his panties. (I wonder, do girls ever experience that thrill wearing boys' clothes?  I doubt it.) I loved Aunt Zelda's response to this, as everything else presented.

What an absolutely wonderful story!! I am so envious that such a wonderful tale as this might really happen. As a former square dancer myself I often swooned with envey at all those lovely full skirted dresses and petticoats on the women, as I so wished that I might be dressed in such beautiful outfits myself. Will we ever get to read about Jane's 2nd week of vacation with her/his Aunt and his new friend?

Great story and really well written.  Can't wait for the next instalment.  Thanks

So sweeeeeeeet!!! oh my gosh, I absolutely LOVED this story - what a delightfully written piece - and what darling characters!