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good story most enjoyable a lesson learned the hard way

just a great story had to read it twice. well done

Delightful tale of Bob and Phil getting their just desserts and Jane and Cindi enjoying every moment of it. Splendid!

a brilliant story of revenge a third reading its just as exciting as previusly

again a brilliant story revenge is a dish best served cold well done more please

an interesting story on my reread its amazing how things change once the trangressor is in panties but also with little confrontation more could be done with this story but its enjoyable to read

Dearest Jane

I was captivated by the techniques you wrote about in a precise and direct manner. You are a very gifted writer.

too tame

the story is well written and enjoyable everyone likes more of the other than normal its interesting how things change with a bit of female guile and inginetety

brilliant story well thought out i started and i finshed it could not put it down more storys like that are well worth the reading well done more please i could say a lot more but feel that this is the best way of saying it more please

Wow, that was a very powerful story.  What insight into the mind of a potential submissive and into the struggle of a novice dominant to control her impulses.  The fact that the arrangement is consensual and voluntary on Bob's part after the first week, even leading to a marraige proposal, erases any sense of cruelty.  Exceptionally fast moving, focused, and strikingly sharp images.  Bob is rather one dimensional but it is interesting to have the story from the woman's perspective for a change. I rarely if ever read Femdom but your story is remarkably good. Thank you for not having any of the usual sissy humiliation insulting the man's manhood.  Her rather panting desire for his tool is a refreshing change. To let him do the Tarzan thing is fabulous.  She is so confident in her dominance she can be taken forcefully and still easily come out on top.  I do not appreciate the swapping as it degrades the trust and love of the slaves.  They love their masters, not some stranger.  Yes, I know the concept of obedience and showing submission, loyalty etc.  All in all, thank you for my favorite Femdom story ever.  You say you are going to write more stories, in your comments.  That would be appreciated.  Thanks for a good read, Kristi
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Thank you all for your wonderful comments!  I've been considering continuing my erotic writing - may be the "push" I need to get restarted!

the first two parts of the story are brilliant how to deal with a boss who just ogles and harrases you without involving the law I look foreward to reading the next parts in due course I know they are on the system but I have to work

Loved your story. Spicy!  And not crude - what a relief. And thankful that there was appreciation, love, & an exchange at times of who's in the "command" position. :)

A very good story with plenty of eroticism but, I am glad to say, no real cruelty. The desire to read on was cleverly generated, and I also found it amusing at times. Oh yes, and I also love happy endings. Funny thing is, unlike some others, I found myself identifying with Jane.

A very good story with plenty of eroticism but, I am glad to say, no real cruelty. The desire to read on was cleverly generated, and I also found it amusing at times. Oh yes, and I also love happy endings. Funny thing is, unlike some others, I found myself identifying with Jane.

Nice story and a fun read. Thank you for the effort. It is much appreciated.--monica

Great story.  Keep going with it.

loved your story, wish the male involved was me, hope there is a second chapter

I second this--hope the feminization and dominance heads into the workplace as well.  You've got a hell of a great start here!

What a terrific start.  Nice deliberate buildup yet with no wasted time.  Extremely arousing sex scenes coupled with the struggle in a woman's mind whether to conquer the man or submit to him.  Really, really erotic with very believable characters.  I can't wait for the next installment.  I'm sure that, just like me, many readers will wish they were Bob.