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Cute story.  One little correction - the law requiring that girls have equal access to sports is Title IX, not Chapter XI.

A beautiful story,i love reading about mothers encouraging there sons to be girls,my mother encouraged me to be a girl and i loved her for it.

I'd like to use your story universe for some tales of my own.  Please consider this and let me know.

Thanks Sharonn

What a wonderful soft and sensual piece of fiction .  hope there is more to this story .If only it could be true

I love stories like this where the mother actively encourages her son to try on something sexy, like women's hosiery or lacy underwear.  I love that her older son wasn't afraid to ask his mother what it's like to wear pantyhose.  That's pretty much like asking your mother if you can try on hers!  It would have been great if the story had included the mom taking her boys to the intimate apparel section of a department store and letting them select their own style and shade while a saleslady looked on in total surprise!

I love these stories, very sweet - please continue.

Where are you?  Great start but a long time gone.  Would like more.

What a lovely story line.  Please expand and expand!  Enjoyed it very much!

Lovely story, full of the kind of things I like. Just one point:
watch those capitals. For a concise summary, have a look at
http://www.bartleby.com/68/22/1122.html
which is a single paragraph that tells you virtually all you need.
Otherwise, a thoroughly enjoyable tale.
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--Pervy

Patti, this is a very good start...I liked the part about the boys dropping out of sports activities and voluntarily asking if they could try on pantyhose...can't wait for the next chapter...keep up the good work.

Barbara Lynn Terry

This story is hopefully a beginning of a series and hopefully a "Universe".  Other information that you are asking is found on our Yahoo Group - Gender Role Reversal Part 2 - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/GenderRole ReversalPart2/?yguid=64491632

Very nice start and looking forward to part 2.  As MKAT says, expand... flesh out your characters more, let us know what they are feeling.

Good Story Please continue it, and by what just bob says, where is the first part of the story?

very nice story so far -- as they all said - please continue the story :)

I love the story very sweet my dear

Patti: i just left my e-mail address so you can tell me where story 1 is.  I tried Fictionmania but could not find your name.
Bob

Patti:  Where are the other stories posted?  You indicate this is the second story; where is the first?

It's a great concept. But expand, expand, expand. What you have now is a good synopsis of a story. But think Samantha Michelle, or going back a ways, Jenny Leeds, or even Caitlyn Rose. More characherization. More description. Paint a picture of what you see with your words.Maybe even get inside one of the kids heads. Will he be going to hte hair show asa model?