I agree with many of the other readers especially about making the story longer. i couldn't think that any woman would be so vindictive.

ok good start but u left out a few items...Adams apple removal, voice adjustment, waist fat to hips, electrolysis(legs,chest,underarms,face and brow shaping), skin tint to oriental tones,maybe a butterfly tatoo or two and even a rose(tatoo) or two on a branch coming out of his/her butt crack, hair extensions(very long) and dyed black,ear piercing, eyelash extensions, and maybe sleep teaching chinese and orders to keep him/her from speaking english and saying anything about his/her real name and sex.  And why not have the good doctor offer to befriend the poor lost chinese girl and train her as her office girl( allowing a little broken english to bespoken) and maybe keep as a maid also.  with no id the good doctor can always keep the threat of deportation to china as an invisibile chain around his/her neck..now im not into this sort of stuff but i think we can jazz up the story with a lot more revenge and not even get to any real violence or slutty sex..whay say you out there in reader land???

the story needs to be longer as when he get better he (she) will know who did this to him and maybe he (she) will like the change and I know that I would like to read your change

At first I thought... what a good plot outline. Then I said,  "What a great plot outline".  But, there are some holes.

If he was dressing as a woman so no one would recognize him... why did she immediately know who he was?

If she wanted to give him an injection, she could have played him... told him he looked wore out... and given him a 'vitamin' injection.

She would need a great deal of help to take away his identity.  I don't think she would get away with it.

Say she didn't get away with it and her court ordered punishment was she had to live with him and support him.

Along the line she falls in love with her creation.  He is at first just happy to be with her and later happy to be a woman. He finds that the reason he was such a poor mate was his undiagnosed, unknown to him, gender dysphoria... which now is not a problem.  And they live happily ever after.

With an ending like that it could eventually be a Disney movie.  You could call it, "What's Up Doc!".

Maybe not!

This was more like a story idea (good story idea!) first draft than whole story.  Lots of loose ends, lots of things still to ID him as Terry, dental records, for example, and lots of things to tie the crime to Janice, just the fact of fresh SRS combined with removed fingerprints would be suspicious.  No alabi, etc.  I'd like to see this made into a longer complete story up to your usual standards, maybe two stories, with the second about Terry coping with being a woman.
           

Not up to your usual standards.  Too fragmented and seemingly written in haste.  You can do way better than this as your other stories prove time and again.