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Comment by Sarah Brianne Smith on 10/12/16
Neither amber nor Jane's sister are her friends...they are brutes in collusion to force a boy to be their version of a woman, submissive and weak minded. Shame on them and one hopes karma returns to them 200% what they have forced and threatened on janet! Comment by cheap backlinks on 07/18/14 y4zDcJ Thanks-a-mundo for the article post.Really looking forward to read more. Great. Comment by Mohit on 10/24/12 Rotem,Your site was worth waiting for. Â It is great. Â Easy to naiagvte. Â Nice pictures. Â You have come a long way as a collector since we first started communicating many years ago when you just a young man fascinated with mini whiskey bottles.Best regards and may you find all the bottles you are looking for.John Sullivan Comment by Silvia. on 04/26/09 I'm sorry, but I didn't like this. I don't like anything forced. Comment by whyguys on 04/01/09 Hmmm.... since some mention the Office of the President. Comment by juliej on 08/08/07 i love this story a lot more than he thought getting caught out by his sister like that brilliant more please Comment by Brian on 09/10/04 While I don't care for the Dom angle of the story, I think we all fantasize about having a sister like this. Ah, if we could turn back time... Comment by Jasmine on 09/10/04 I am with Jesse on this, Amber is no friend, just a bully domme. this relationship will emulate Sleeping with the Enemy it they get together. Comment by julie j on 08/14/04 very good story i like the way his sister got over the shock and helped david a bit more than he wished this should carry on as another part to this story as theire is so much more to write ie parents reaction to david, the job interview, are just a few that can be added iwould like to read some more well doneplease write more Comment by Mike on 08/13/02 My Question is--When do we get a chance to have a female like Amber to vote for for President?? You have to admit,What David & so many others wish for,Amber delivered,with Gusto! Great writing! Comment by Angie on 08/11/01 I love the story!Too be a pretty boy and get caught by a sister who is cool with it wood be awsome! Comment by Diane Sutton on 06/03/01 Well, this story was somewhat of a surprise for me as the story was something I would expect from someone else. The story although well done is not like those that I expect from this author. I think that the character more aptly fits into a story done by someone like an author named Cynetta. Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 06/02/01 "I think you have a real friend there, Sis." Comment by Nellie D on 06/01/01 A lot of changes in a very short time for David / Janet. The need to dress was started at a very young age but the long term change happened that weekend. The details and characters were good as was the writing. |
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