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Jasmine Cally Vail - The Awakening
by G L Hudson

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Comment by ashley on 09/27/10
so far an excellent read.
Comment by charlotte,Denmark on 10/29/08
the storyought to published in "The Times litterary suplement",very Well done
Comment by Yoron on 05/26/08
GL.
This is what I would like to define as a masterpiece.
Handcrafted to the highest expectations
As well as aspirations.

And fulfilling them all.

Why haven't you published your works?
Ah, but you have, right :)
And we love it..

Yoron.

Comment by Dianna on 03/19/08
I like how things got out of control. Once again, another amazing piece of work sugar, now onto the next piece for me!
Comment by Noel Lexicon on 11/16/07
What a marvelous tour de force. Masterfully written and your story pace was excellent. Please keep writing!
Comment by Jakejake on 07/05/05
A WONDERFULL STORY. BEST WRITING I HAVE SEEN IN A LONG TIME
Comment by Elaine B on 06/30/05
Great story, well written, well told.  The characters are believeable and likeable.  It was very easy for me to fantasize and put myself in Jasmine's place, and it was a fun ride.  How wonderful to have a mate who loves you as a sissy and as a girl, and who lets you be who you really are.  How wonderful to be teased and forced to do those things that you are just dying to do, anyway.  This is a really fun fantasy.  I am bi, so a little fun with a guy for Jasmine would also have been nice and exciting.  All in all, a very enjoyable story.  Thanks
Comment by Happy Reader on 06/28/05
Dear G.L.,
Thank you for a very interesting, entertaining and satisfying story.
I always read your wonderful work with enjoyment.  Do continue!
Comment by Paula Mortenson on 06/24/05
One of the best stories posted for some time. Thoroughly enjoyed it. It felt realistic, with the feelings of doubt well expressed that we all feel from time to time.

Thank you.

Paula
Comment by Mandi on 06/23/05
Awesome, Awesme, Awesome!!!!!

A couple times, the characters motives got me a little hostile, but this is a great love story!!
Comment by Sissy Demi on 06/23/05
I have read parts one and two and have enjoyed them so far. The writing is very crisp and laced with a bit of humor. The characterizations are well done. The only quibble I have is Karen seems to have suddenly become the domineering type whereas that had not been hinted at in the buildup to where it happened. Of course, mosre may be explained later.

All in all I am enjoying the read. Thanks for a great story so far!

Demi


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