Hi Lisa.
I liked your story, but I think what Jayne need is SRS.
And her sister is an ANGEL  !
Write more, don't stop writing, you're a good writer, please.
Kisses.
Silvia.

What a lovely story.  You made me wish I was you when you described Jim making lovbe to you like that.  It's such a precious fantasy. Please write more and more.

I lovely cute and highly erotic story :) more please!

Very well done and like Paula I tend to stay away from XXX type stories but there are times when I'll take a chance.

This one was one of those that didn't give me the feeling that it had too much of the things that normally turn me off. I kind of enjoyed it and would hope you turn your efforts to writing more tales so that we can again spend sometime with your thoughts and fantasies.

Diane

wonderful story. very much like many fantisies i have had. looking forward to more.

Thoroughly enjoyed your story of Jay/Jayne. Brought back memories of my own experiences with my older sister, many years ago. I wish you the very best in all of your future endeavors. With love and thanks, Dawnie

Hi, there :)

Glad you liked the story.  Thanks for letting me know.  I hope it made you as "warm" as it
made me when I wrote it.  I'll get to work on the rest of it soon.

I may have posted it on Fictionmania when I was writing under the name Marci Manseau.

Hugs,
Lisa

While I do like how well writen it is as well as the lenth I'm not much into stories rated more than R.   Keep up the good work though.

Very  well written story, I enjoyed it greatly.  I was sorry to see it end, I think of it as a story without an ending.
Write more stories as this one.

I had one thought,  has this story been posted elsewhere?

fantastic story, so graphically written too. More like this please.