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How beautiful!
When boys become girls...
We need more femininity on the Planet!!!

a good story refeshed my mind but a enjoyab;le story trying to get to know hid fem side

You keep gaining new fans. You simply must write again.

Hi Janell,

I think you have a great storyline going. Did you ever finish it?
Or will you finish it?
Hugs, Fran

intresting start hard to understand but worth it at the end

Great story.   MORE!   MORE!

More! I want more. Great start, don't leave us hanging.

I agree with Commentator.  At the end of part II, he's in school; at the beginning of part III he's at the mall witrh no connecting material.  Seems like a part is missing.  Something must have happened to get him in such a confused state that he mixes up his girlfriend, Cynthia, and his Mom.

There seems to be a missing part of the story here. Maybe the wrong part was posted next? Part three seems to jump off from nowhere.

I liked the story and am looking forward to what will happen now that the pageant is over and his mother pushes him to continue in dresses.

     I found the initial installment of this story quite enjoyable.  The style is easy to read and the premise has a catchy twist on the usual "caught with the consequences" scenario.   There is ample opportunity for expansion of the story into a number of different directions, and more than one character to develop.  

I eagerly await the next part.

Nice beginning, but lots of unanswered questions.  Does Jay like his mom?  Seems like he would really resent her as she kept him from doing boy stuff that he liked.  What she and the doctor are doing to him without his knowledge and consent is criminal, and I hope, when he finds out, he gets mad, gets revenge.  Is Kellie in on the feminization, in league with Mom?  What did mom do to get him to participate?  I( take it mom has promised him he can go back to being a boy after the pageant, or something like that to get his cooperation.  I can't wait for the scene when the pageant is over and he says, "Whew, that's over with!  Where are my REAL clothes."  And Mom won't let him, or tries to trick him.  Hope he fights her.  Good beginning; I'm looking forward to part II

A good story for your first effort here. I would like to see you continue with it as you did leave a lot of room for more to come. I liked the way this boy is being turned into a more feminine girl.

I can relate to the way the mother is making a mistake like she has and, it works well with the story.

I like the suttle hints of the use of hormones and the brainwashing that is being forced upon an unspecting boy. Keep up the story.

Diane

 For her stupidity I'd get even with that bitch of a mother. She and her friends deserve jail time and behavior modification themselves. Especially the Doctor.