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Jennifer's Revenge
by Jennifer

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Comment by juliej on 05/05/08
a lesson learnt and learnt well brillant story

Comment by Dianna on 04/20/08
What a horrid trick. And what kind of Mother would allow this?

Comment by jeannette on 11/30/07
I like this story... Would love to have seen you "jazz it up" a little (example: Force Harry to dress as a "majorette" or "cheerleader"). Keep up the good work.

Comment by Rone welles on 09/07/07
 Nice ,, a fun story and not over done in the humilation department..
thank you for sharing with us ...
**** Rone welles

Comment by juliej on 08/02/07
what a great story i think the warnis do not upset you sister if she is older than you or even if she is younger brilliant story well done

Comment by Peg Thebois on 07/02/07
What a great little story, so humiliating for him.  Too bad dear sister never did get a chance to use those photos again, or even use the threat of them to torment little bro.

Comment by Somebody on 06/21/07
Jennifer, I really like the way you write your stories...But they are coming a lot predictable. In fact, they're becoming pretty much remakes of what we have seen already; bows, sweet little girl, Emily/Lucy, coat...Please, give us something new...Prom dance with makeup and boyfriend? Yes!

Comment by sam on 06/21/07
I love this story. spellcheck it though.



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