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Jian
by Abecker60

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Comment by Raist on 06/02/13
Loved it great story 5/5 stars!

Comment by Carl Lawrence on 02/12/12
Mum continued to punnish me, saying, she was not happy with me being a little boy again, now Im to become a little girl for the rest of the summer so she told me to take off all my boy clothes and handed me a pair of little girls panties and told me to put them on, I looked at the pink panties but knew better than argue with mum and stepped into them and pulled them over my bottom, next she handed me a pretty little flower dress wich had lots of lace on the hem and puffed sleaves and told me to lift my arms while she and she slid it on me and pulled it down over my body, tieing the large bow at the back of my dress, it had lots of small buttons on the back of it to make sure I could never take it off by myself, by now, I was really looking and feeling like a 9 year old girl, then mummy did my hair in a style that suited a little girl and she tied two pink bows each side of my hair and put some cream on my face to give me rosy cheeks, a pair of red mary jane shoes followed with lace anckle socks witch I thought completed my little girl looks, but mum said that I didn't look quite right so she went to the draw and got a little girls dolly that I was to hold in one hand and some pretty flowers to hold in my other hand. Mum said that I look so pretty but her little girls not complete without a girls name so from now on I would be called Tina.
Then she said that she would be taken me to the park so she could show all the other little children and their mums what a pretty little girl she had and if I was a good girl I could play with the other girls in the park but not any boys as boys play rough and she don't want her little girl to get hurt and cry.
There was plenty of little girls in the park and I had a great time playing with them, we played on the swings and with our dollies and even hopscotch togeth'er being carefull not to show my knickers in my very short dress. This one girl I met whoes name was Trasy and about age 9  became my best freind and she knew I was really a boy and asked my mum if she would keep me as a girl forever as I look so pretty and great fun to play with, of course, mum told trasy, Tina will allways be a girl now as she has told me that it's good being a girl and loves playing with you too, great said trasy, I will help teach her how to behave and act like a little girl we will have a fab time Mrs Lawrence, she said, does Tina know how to use the toilet like a girl she asked, because I will show her that too, so Trasy showed me how to pull my panties down and lift my dress and sit on the toilet like a good little girl. When I went home for my supper and to be put to bed, she said that tomorrow she will take me to buy a schoolgirl uniform ready to start my new girls school, I thanked her and said, mummy, I had a great time today and that I never want to be a boy again, I know sweety, dont worry you never will, and kissed me goodnight.

Comment by carl Laurence on 02/10/12
Just thought you would like to read this.
One day when I was 12 years old, I was our the garden playing with my sister when she pushed me over and I hurt my knees and went running in to mommy crying. Mommy said, Carl, your such a baby sometimes you act just like a toderler and I think you need to br tought a lesson. I am going to put you back into short pants and diapers, but mom I protested, Im not a little boy, oh yes you will be she said, now get undressed and lay on that table. I lay there completly naked in front of mom amd my sister and she creamed me all over my lower parts with diaper rash cream and then powdered me, then she slid a terry cloth diaper under me and pinned it up, then pulled up on me a pair of plastic pants that had teddybear prints on them, Mom then proceded to put on me a pair of schoolboy short pants with matching grey t shirt, knee lenth socks wih school shoes and I looked like a 5 year old boy, then she said that she will take me to the park so I could play with the other children and not to worry if I need the toilet as I should use my diaper and she would change me in the park.
I felt like a real child again playing with the little boys and girls in my diaper and little shorts and the girls would come up and tease and bully me untill I cryed and say, ask your mommy for your paci little boy, do you need your bottle baby. I spent the whole day in the park but I did get the chance to play on the swings and other amusements and didn't really mind when mom told me that this is how I would be dressed and treated for a long time to come.
carl.

Comment by CD Pearl on 05/29/11
WOW, This is one amazing story... i just cant wait to hear what happened next

Comment by Jan on 11/26/10
Well written, can't for part 2

Comment by Johnny on 10/03/10
Please!!!  Finish the story!  The bar scene was soooooo erotic!  I am dying to see how this turns out!!!!!

Comment by Scott on 03/28/09
I loved your story about Jian, esspecially the first part in the bar. I have always had a fantasy about that happening, but at my age it will just remain that---a fantasy.
Please write more she-male stories like that, but without the other men in the picture.

Comment by carla michelle on 06/08/08
good story. just need to finish it.

Comment by juliej on 04/29/06
a great begining but what has he got into hopefully the next episode will not be long in comming

Comment by Michael on 02/25/06
Loved your story, but where,s part 2. Soon I hope. Very erotic, very good. More Please.

Comment by rachelanne on 02/22/06
I loved this story thus far.  I have read numerous additonal parts on the Nifty site.  The story is unfinished there.  However, the earlier parts have more interestingplot twists than the later ones.  I hope the story becomes more focused as it goes along.

Comment by vance on 02/22/06
I LOVE YOUR STORY.IT WAS HOT! I WOULD LOVE TO READ PART 2 OF THIS STORY.



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