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Jian
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Comment by Raist on 06/02/13
Loved it great story 5/5 stars! Comment by Carl Lawrence on 02/12/12 Mum continued to punnish me, saying, she was not happy with me being a little boy again, now Im to become a little girl for the rest of the summer so she told me to take off all my boy clothes and handed me a pair of little girls panties and told me to put them on, I looked at the pink panties but knew better than argue with mum and stepped into them and pulled them over my bottom, next she handed me a pretty little flower dress wich had lots of lace on the hem and puffed sleaves and told me to lift my arms while she and she slid it on me and pulled it down over my body, tieing the large bow at the back of my dress, it had lots of small buttons on the back of it to make sure I could never take it off by myself, by now, I was really looking and feeling like a 9 year old girl, then mummy did my hair in a style that suited a little girl and she tied two pink bows each side of my hair and put some cream on my face to give me rosy cheeks, a pair of red mary jane shoes followed with lace anckle socks witch I thought completed my little girl looks, but mum said that I didn't look quite right so she went to the draw and got a little girls dolly that I was to hold in one hand and some pretty flowers to hold in my other hand. Mum said that I look so pretty but her little girls not complete without a girls name so from now on I would be called Tina. Comment by carl Laurence on 02/10/12 Just thought you would like to read this. Comment by CD Pearl on 05/29/11 WOW, This is one amazing story... i just cant wait to hear what happened next Comment by Jan on 11/26/10 Well written, can't for part 2 Comment by Johnny on 10/03/10 Please!!! Finish the story! The bar scene was soooooo erotic! I am dying to see how this turns out!!!!! Comment by Scott on 03/28/09 I loved your story about Jian, esspecially the first part in the bar. I have always had a fantasy about that happening, but at my age it will just remain that---a fantasy. Comment by carla michelle on 06/08/08 good story. just need to finish it. Comment by juliej on 04/29/06 a great begining but what has he got into hopefully the next episode will not be long in comming Comment by Michael on 02/25/06 Loved your story, but where,s part 2. Soon I hope. Very erotic, very good. More Please. Comment by rachelanne on 02/22/06 I loved this story thus far. I have read numerous additonal parts on the Nifty site. The story is unfinished there. However, the earlier parts have more interestingplot twists than the later ones. I hope the story becomes more focused as it goes along. Comment by vance on 02/22/06 I LOVE YOUR STORY.IT WAS HOT! I WOULD LOVE TO READ PART 2 OF THIS STORY. |
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